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Chapter 8 - Thanks for the update. I know that you don't like this story but it is coming along great! Please finish it.

Great story and I'm glad to see it's not over yet! Whats a tetsudai? If you already mention this, gomen...but I have short-term-memory when it comes to words I have not heard of before. :P

Another good chapter. I'm not surprised that Kagome asked Inuyasha his help; some women just aren't capable of sleeping around and being okay with it, even if it is the reason she's there. And she really does care about Inuyasha on a more personal level, otherwise, she wouldn't be looking for ways to free him in her spare time. I'm not sure that he feels quite as fond of her, but he does care about her on some level. But, Inuyasha's life has truly been hellish, so you can't blame him for being wary. I look forward to reading more soon.

I'm simply amazed. The reason I don't review each of your chapters individually is because I soar through them all like a woman possessed. I just finished chapter 7 and I love what you've done. Simply put, the characters are 3 dimensional and yet they still possess those same personalities that we know and love. The plot is refreshingly unique while at the same time appearing seamless. The Inuyasha and Kagome love scenes were simply perfectly done. You're not just an author but some kind of miracle worker. Thank you; you are one of my favourite authors on this fanfiction website. :) Keep up the great work! We're all cheering on you. (while at the same time we are all secretly jealous of your wonderful writing skills.. I guess practice makes perfect, eh? ;)

Don’t let your muse die, this tragedy could affect millions! (we are all desperate to read this story to the end!) :)

UGH not again you are torturing us leaving chapters like this.......XD im gonna die if you keep doin this to me!!!!!!! ugh i love it sooooo much it was a great little thing to go into Kougas part in all of this. It was a real turning part. Well i obviously cant wait to see inuyasha come back again.......WHY MUST YOU BE SO CRUEL LIKE EPISODES ON TV? (you know those episodes that say "to be continued" and then you just want to punch the tv cause now you have to wait..well yeah thats kinda how im feeling right now) i love your stories sooooo much please continue and please finish it o and e-mail me when you are going to port the next chapter i would love that soooo much its such a dissapointment to go onto aff to find and new chapter not there yet XD hehehe ok yeah luv our stories!!!! *~*BLONDESiNGRCHiCK*~*

Hmm.

I found myself entranced by this story and the amazing depth your universe offered. Which, honestly, was what kept my attention, long after the arrousing smutt grew dull. At the moment I whole heartily agree this is not love but it dangles dangerously on the tips. Kagome and InuYasha's intimacies have far surpassed the comfortable realm of passion, lust and desire. And so I find myself unwilling to read her experiences with a new Shrine Prostitute. Its more a unwillingness to confront reality, that no doubt she will be serviced by a well-trained professional and the enjoyment will be ripe... hell, it would be insane to think otherwise. Keep adding if this is what you enjoy, for I enjoyed reading it.

Till next time... adios.

Yes, I am excited! I thought you played this chapter brilliantly.

What an interesting turn of events! The Souta touch was cute/disgusting! I love your story, it's storyline and characterization is of high quality! Mad props for the idea and sticking to it! Please keep updating!
~Alma

I hope the next chapter comes soon!

Good chapter. Kouga seems like a likeable guy, but you're absolutely right. Us Inu/Kag fans were definitely missing our cute little hanyou, especially since he is so sad in this story, LOL. Kagome, and to a lesser extent Ryu, are the only ones who seem to give HALF a damn about Yash, so I'll be glad when they reunite next chapter. The situation looks grim for them, though, with hanyous basically considered to be nothing but pets to humans and youkai alike. But, you can't help but hope that Kagome will find that loophole for them. I'm not sure that she is fully in love with Inuyasha yet, but she's definitely halfway there.