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I love the story. When I saw you had updated I did a little mental jig. Please update quickly.
Thanx

I am so totally cheering Kagome on! I can't wait to see what happens next! It's fantastic! It's fabulous! It's fantabulous! Keep writing! This funny, hot, and totally original story deserves an ending! I give it 5 outta 5! ^_^

OHHH ! MY GOODNESS! Love IT! I totally enjoyed how you came up with the solution and brought in the rosary! Soo good! I'm so very glad you did!

I can't wait to see what else you have in stored for the lovely couple. Will they finally say that they love each other? Will anything bad happen? XD Oh so many questions but please tell me that this isn't the end of it. X3 Your doing such a great job. This really is one of my favorite stories. Thank you and please keep it up!

Yeah! It looks like their happy ending is in sight... or is it? Here's hoping for more roadblocks on the happy trip back home.

D'oh! A bit of a name mixup where "Kazuma" should be "Ryu" in this segment, I believe:

"What are you smiling for? he snapped.

Kagome raised her eyebrow in protest. "Is there anything wrong with smiling Kazuma?" He started when she said his name; she guessed he wasn’t used to hearing it from the people who passed through here every day. They probably never bothered. Pity really, these two seemed highly entertaining to her.

Kazuma rubbed the slightly bald spot on his head, making Kagome wonder if it was bald naturally or from his constant attention."

The AU character of Kagome is endearing and makes puts me into one giant giggle fit. She's adorable and I can almost feel her discomfort. Very well written!

{AN "Sorry, apparently I suck. I just checked the prologue and it seems I kept mixing up Ryu’s and Kazuma’s names."}

DOH! Sorry, my bad! That's what I get for not reading the entirety before trying to be helpful, lol!

*bows low* Gomen!

I'm in love with this story...it's become my new drug.

This story is so cute! I love the was Kagome and Inu Yasha start to open up to each other slowly. The only thing I don't really like is that Kagome has a tendency to get really wordy and repeat herself a lot when she gets upset. But ah well. I also love the politics being worked into the story! It's interesting to think about half-breeds being the minority instead of another race of the same species.

I'm glad to see that you plan on finishing this fic. You've been working on it for so long and doing so very well. I can't wait to see what you have planned for our two love birds.
Keep it up! Love what your doing and going with this story. Great job on details and all. I can't wait till another chapter.

Great story, hope that when you have some time to yourself you will be able to continue it. You are very skilled as a writer. Congratulations on thinking up such an interesting and unique topic. :) Cheers.

I finally had enough time to let my anxiety die down. I literally couldn't touch this piece immediatly afterwards, it was just too fresh, the poetry of Inuyasha, Kogame's time together that if I had read right after her next worship with another prostitute I think I would have had to punch something... and my walls already have been replastered too many times as it is. [accidents: stupidity; not anger problems] And after coming back I thank you, really appreciate how you worked the Kouga plot. Some might have been a little let down with the lack of smutt after so much from the previous chapters, but I was grateful for it. It just would have been a kicker. Keep up the great writing, this is one of the best fan produced amatuer publishings I've seen, period. For it to be here, is just a tribute to the talent that affiliates with this site.

Till next time... adios.