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for Shrine Prostitute

by FlameTwirler

person Sand_Storm_10.5
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its not over yet is it? At least a coming home chapter..... heh heh... coming.... sorry.
person mise_keith
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think reviewing this story is just a personal duty to me, though I don't really do it realy often (reading stories written in English, when that's just a language you study at school and not your first language, doesn't make you too much sure of yourself when you speak or write.) I just LOVE "Shrine Prostitute", and I can sure enough say that it is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read, and certainly THE best InuYasha/Kagome fanfiction. I literally adore your characterization, the cheerful insecurity Kagome has, her naivete, the slow steps you take in describing InuYasha uncertainties, little discoveries. I love the hesitant, human, natural way you attribute to their feelings. And I love the little charms you sew and put in the descriptions of their time together, of their moves, placid, shuddering, passionate.
What you write, your characters (Ryu is just great, in his role of unconventional father figure) are just too good to be in a fanfiction.
A little kiss from Italy.
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you're back! I've been waiting for this update and I have to say that your last chapter was well worth the wait, poor Inuyasha needed a break and I was worried for a while that he wasn't going to get this major life change. *squee* Don't make us wait too long for the next chapter, ok m'dear! <33
person Kat
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Truly a work of art. I am amazed and thrilled. Thank you so much, the wait was definitely worth it. I also love how your story follows logic, it's refreshing to read fanfiction that is written with such an obvious amount of talent. The characters are staying in character and I am tryly grateful for that. Thank you so much. :)
person Necr0mantic
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wooooow, chapter 10 is my absolute favorite so far! I'm in love with the way you're able to write these two in this AU perspective yet remain so true to their original personalities. As I mentioned before this story has become my new drug and I was tickled to death to see a new chapter today! Please keep this up, you're doing such an amazing job. ^^
person kitten
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story since you fist posted it, I kept forgetting to review, but I think it is AMAZING! I've never heard any story like it at all, ever! Keep up the great work, and thank you for updating! ^^
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just lovely... I love this story so much and I hope you update soon. I wanna know what happens between Inu and Kags. Your doing a wonderful job... keep it up please. Take care.
person nmos
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
blaahh! this is sooooo good.
and soooo well written.
that's truly rare here.
can't wait for you next chapter!
person HanaTama
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
QUICK QUICK! UPDATE! QUICK QUICK!


Love,
Melody ^^
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
w00t! Am so glad you're back... Great story. Was wondering how it was gonna play out on how got out of there. Also made me wonder about who was at the shrine when her mother went there. Hmmm... interesting... hehe, update when ya can! ;)