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for Shrine Prostitute

by FlameTwirler

person nmos
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is really good. you're a really good writer.
although that was not a very nice place to end that chapter for your poor reader's sakes.
suspense may kill several people.
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ow.my.god!!!!!
dis was a kool chappie
pls pls pls update again soon
person Lost Child
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, I really loved that chapter. I feel sorry for Kagome though, Inuyasha hurt her very badly by saying she couldn't love him. wah! I have to read the next chapter and read what happens. Hurry and update soon
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
um i happen to be in love with this story. and if you stopped it, i beleive i would be devistated.
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw. I'd expect no less rocky a road from our couple! Nice work. She needs to work on her proposing, but she finally admitted her love and I cheered.
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im sorry im sorry im sorry - i know i should have reviewed. i know i should be telling you what a wonderful story this is and how i am continually checking to see if you've added another chapter. i know i should be letting you know that you are a really good storyteller and you have good writing skills. i know i should be telling you all of this everytime i read each chapter. i know all this 'cuz i jump on you quick enough if you go a long time without updating... but I'M LAZY - OKAY????

i just forget that i don't go to a bookstore and buy your books, that you're not a professional writer, that if i'm not going to pay you money i sure as heck better offer up praise and thanks to you for your excellent efforts. thank you.
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i am relly crying....that has never happened before....

please update soon....i need to read more
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i am relly crying....that has never happened before....

please update soon....i need to read more
person Anon
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no. Oh no, no, no... why did it have to end?! I actually thought I'd get from the beginning to end of a really, really good fanfic in one night! And then I find out it's not done?! NO!! *sobs* It was getting to such a great part, too...

I really like the way you've twisted the characters around this very subtle plot you have. I'm really enjoying reading it and will love watching Inuyasha (hopefully) adapt to Kagome's household. I think he's already pleased with the separate bedroom for them both. And to think... it's a good luck charm to "do it", too! Yay!

*looks up hopefully* Email me when you update, please?
person KeiChanz
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Can't wait for the next chapter. =]