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btw I would love it if you would add me to your update email list thingy! kijo52@yahoo.com

And once again PLEASE update. Onegai? With chocolate almond flavored pocky ontop?

This is a wonderful well written story once I started reading it I could not stop. I love the thought you have put into the main characters they have come to life inyour story. You are doing a fantastic job on this many thanks for sharing.

i love long chapters. there's just so much more opportunity for character development and plot advancement. it also helps the reader to be able to live in the story for awhile. a good story, i think, is one that the reader can live in and be comfortable doing so. you make everything come alive so well.

Yeah Kagome! Hanyou rights! But Inuyasha wrongs... It's pretty demeaning for her to get the paperwork done against his will, but her heart is in the right place. I hope she can find the time to write him between school/private eye investigations into youkai and the extra research for her oddball teacher. I love your writing and this story is so worth waiting for each new chapter!

I disagree. That was anything but long...it wasn't nearly long enough! :-) I very much liked this chapter. The pacing was great and I was interested and wondering what was going to happen next all the way through. Considering that one of the main characters wasn't even involved, I am even more impressed that you did such a great job with keeping it exciting and fascinating. I look forward to the next chapter!

Hon, there had BETTER be a happy ending here! I do admire your realistic writing; if there were youkai in the world, I have no doubt it would be exactly like this story. And Kagome's mother a perv?! That's a break from the norm. All in all, sexy, fluffy, refreshing. One of my favs thus far.

Am really liking your story, and look forward to each an every update. I know, sounds lame, but I do, lol. As for the story, I like your characterizations of all involved And really like your OC, Ryu. He's a character all himself aight, lol. And Inu, for his part, cant see what shes really trying to do, or does he and perhaps hes afraid maybe. Hm.. now Kags has got her ass into something. Should be interesting on how she gets herself outta this one. Great chap to an excellent story. And can you possibly set me up for your update list here, Id appreciate it. And update when t can! ;)

Bless your heart hun! I'm so very glad to see your feeling better but please do take care of yourself. Thank you for getting another chapter up. Take as much time as you need. ^^

i am so sorry that this story is sucking the life out of you. i understand how that can be. when someone puts their heart and soul into a creative project, that kind of thing is bound to happen. and this is a lovely, hot, romance novel you're writing and you are writing it very well, hence the feelings of lifesucking.

i must tell you, when i saw that you'd posted a new chapter i jumped up and started dancing around my computer {which went pretty well until i hit the wall}. And it is SUCH a GOOD chapter too: IY is off at the sex shrine pouting and whining [how like a man] and Kagome is out in the world fighting for her man. and damn, if you didn't make me start crying when he wouldn't come to the bloody phone!!!! what a jerky turkey! i just wanted to walk right over to the shrine and bitch-slap him for a minute until he grew some sense!

one thing, while i often hesitate to point language things out due to English being different from country to country and region to region, you used the word ancy; if you were referring to someone acting nervous, like they had ants crawling on them, that word is spelled antsy and i'm pretty sure its American slang - straight from Brooklyn, NY. that's me, a mind full of useless trivia.

take your time in writing [and i can't tell you how it hurts to say that], the majority of your readers understand that to turn out a story of such excellence as this cannot be done in an instant. it requires, in addition to a brilliantly inventive mind, a lot of thought, time, rewriting, working your favorite butt off, editing, working more of your favorite butt off, screaming at the walls, the cats, the neighbor's dog, thinking, swearing, oh yeah, and working your favorite butt off, to achieve work of this quality. Stay healthy.

i love this story, and can't wait for more. it's grown so much since the beginning. you had me hooked from the first, but the style and content has kept me coming back until i caught up to you.

i don't know how you managed to give inuyasha a sense of quiet dignity in the situation you put him in, but you managed quite well.

even in a setting completely apart from any setting i have ever seen them in, you have managed to keep everyone in character.

i hope you update soon and regularly.

thank you for a good story