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for Shrine Prostitute

by FlameTwirler

person anon.
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderful as always!
person raewn
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not normally a Inu/Kag fan. I tend to view Inuyasha as a boy, not a man, and as a sort of adolescent infatuation that Kagome will outgrow with time (I much prefer the sess/kag pairing). But i have to say, this fic does a very good job of molding Inuyasha into a man. He still has his boy-ish charm and all the rough edges that make him endearing in the manga and anime but he also possesses a depth that most authors forget. He is 'real' to the reader, and the insecurities he experiences in relation to Kagome are so human. I love that you are going so in-depth describing his confusion about what his relationship with Kagome will mean as well as exploring what it means to him to have hope and how hard he is fighting against that possibility. He is so wounded.
This story has captured my interest for a while now. I've been a loyal reader for months and months. I wanted to let you know that you're doing a very good job and to thank you for sharing this story. Who knows...maybe I'll give Inuyasha another chance. Though I don't know how he'll stand up to the overwhelming sexiness of Sesshomaru. *wink*
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOO HOO! We got an update! I love where this story is going. keep up the good work!
person Reika
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Let me just say you are one amazing writer. Despite the what the title might imply, you make the 'profession' seem like nothing out of the ordinary or disgusting. I had been meaning to review since I began but I thought one collective review might suffice. From one writer to another, I must say that I have not read a fanfic that is more interesting, emotional, entertaining and down-right stupendous! I hope that you will continue with this story and you will update this great masterpiece soon (I know how anxious readers get, so no hurrys)! Take care.
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm rooting for them...Don't give up Kagome...have a little faith Inuyasha. I'm hoping your finding inspiration from the exciting conclusion of our favorite manga. INUYASHA FOREVER!!!!
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it!
I can't wait till the next one.
^Dei Dei
person LB
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't tell you how much I love this story, it is so nice to read such a well thought out mature story. I get so excited when I see a new chapter and I even re-read them over and over while waiting for more. I am not good at reviewing so I will just say that this story is one of my all time favorite and I can't wait to read more and I am delighted that you plan is for 25 chapters! Thank you for this story!!
person freelke
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sooo fantastic. I hope the next chapter is up soon!!! I get so antsy between chapters. I love your viewpoint and how you tell the story. It seems so true to life. Please post the next chapter before I die of suspense :)
person weyrdkat
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FLAME!! It's good to see you alive and kicking. The story is progressing wonderfully, and I can't wait to see where you finally end up going with it!
person Anon
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great addition!