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for A Wonderful Day

by AuroraNyte

person Kit
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!! Hope there is a sequel or something because that was just awesome!!!
person Yuta
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful story indeed. I very much enjoyed reading it. I thought the content very thought out and I liked the whole "Sesshoumaru playful dog" Act. I really do think that you should make this one-shot into an actual story. It would benifit the plot greatly. And I am others would probably be happy to read it. I would honestly love to read another story by yourself and look forward to such.
person tanesha
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was so wonderful

the way sesshomaru was playing and rolling around in the grass and flowers like that. in the real anime sesshomaru always goes off by himself for a while to walk and to be alone. so maybe sesshomaru might not have rolled around like that but the wanting and like to and dreaming of being free and not having to worry about being the lord or having to expect someone to take care of them or to be cold or ruthless. he could just be free and play and rest whenever he wanted to.

so i wasn't that out of character.

i loved your story and it has very very few typos in it.

i loved how sesshomaru leaned down and said no thank you kagome for the wonderful day. that was perfect.

so please continue with this story,it has so much potenial and there is so much that more to see and talk about.

update soon

ja ne
person angels-do-exist
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww.......... that was the sweetest, cutest thing ever!
I loved it totally!! Though if you ever had the time i beg you to continue it one day!!!
person Kuma
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its awesome, I love how original it is though I wish it wasn't a one-shot your on my reccomended stories ja ne for now ill be looking for more of ur work
person Kisa
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
funny story! I LUVED IT! <3
person izzyco2001
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Please continue with it! I want to read more!
person bookworm88
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man the was SOOOOOO funny i am literaly laughing out loud with tears running down my face
i have a puppy who looks at me like that ALL the time i glad you got that out of your system
person Metis
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, that was nice and relaxing. Thank YOU for the Wonderful Fic. ~_^
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol i loved it. I know you said not to ask but maybe a suggestion will do? If you don't want to continue it why not let others add to your story? or if you finish your other stories and don't have anything else to write maybe you can continue it? I think it was really cute and I would love to see more added to it but I won't bug you to add more. Just a few suggestions that hopefully you will consider.