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Great story. Are you going to add more to it. What was Sesshy's hidden agenda. Please write more. Angel Sere

mmm....sesshoumaru's hair up in black laquer sticks.....nice......*snaps out of it* sorry, i fixate. this was great andi, you portray sesshoumaru so well (mannerisms, attitudes, etc.), all the time, in every single story...i guess that is just testimony to your writing skills in general. *sigh* you're the best andi.
luv, cdub

sequal! dude this was sooo cute! i love it.

Wow...all I had to say was wow after I saw that picture(still drooling by the way). The fact that I saw the picture then read the story made even better. It was a preverted, hot little fic, and I absolutely loved it! I hope you come up with more stuff like this! ^_^

--Man, that damn picture was HOT!!! Excuse the perversion...^_^;

EM

I didn't realize when I speedread this over at Y!Hosting that Izayoi didn't realize what Sesshoumaru had done XD. And thank goodness! lol... Anyway, I like you leave the "explanation" for Sesshoumaru's behavior to the end b/c throughout it, the reader is left wondering why the heck he's doing what he's doing and while gratuitous smut never really needs a reason, you do a really nice job of *giving* a reason for his actions. I would have liked it a lot less if Sesshoumaru had just decided one day to come mess around with his brother b/c the kid was cute. haha. But like "Last of" you've come up with a really good reason for the sex (or fooling around in this case) that completely transforms your story into so much more than just plain smut.

I admit I was a little squeamish when you said Inuyasha looked like a human 4-yr old but I kept the 16 years of age in mind throughout. He has a very young body but his mind at least has gone through 16 years of living and while that's still young in human years, Inuyasha *is* a demon, after all ^^

I really liked your description of the tail though. I could picture it perfectly! hehe...AND now I must go relook at Zyephen's picture b/c it's such a guilty pleasure XD, like your stories!! *hug*

Very erotic and descriptive. It was very gorgeous with the innocent feel to it, very childlike yet mature. Sesshomaru's character was amazingly kept in character and the descriptions of their body tones and backstory into their tails was very informintative and good.

What's this thing? XDD Why is it getting bigger? Why are you balls turning BLUE!? XDDD

Nah. That was great, wonderful. Usually I don't like shota or anything such but aaah. -Drools- That was really, really nice, even though I'd of liked to see Sesshoumaru fuck the poor boy. >> His tail would defintiily fall off sooner, ne? XD

I'd actually like to talk and get to know each other. ^^ I'm getting tired of reading stories and having no idea what kind of excellent writers write them.

So, E-mail me!

InuYasha55128@Yahoo.com

Love Love.

SQUEEE!!!

Im sure it was Sesshomaru......XD God damn that was hot!

Oh, that was unbearably cute. I'm so going to hell for liking that, but really, it was adorable. I love the concept of them originally having tails. Really, though, my favorite part was the ending. It was very Sesshoumaru-ish.

All in all, great work.