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by chanda

person Thorns
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is good but you need to work on a few things, eg. grammer, spelling and such. I can give you a hand with them if you would like, just send a email to the_cats_meows@hotmail.com or msg me on msn.