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for A Captain's Prize

by chanda

schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If you loved bunghole, have you mentioned the poop deck yet? While reading aloud 'Voyage of the Dawn Treader' by CS Lewis, we nearly died of laughter when we came across the poop deck in the description of the ship. Oh yeah, just open your mind to the different definitions of that one!

Good story.
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, I just read the previous 28 chapters and i'm impressed and hungry for more. Please update soon.
person BastardOmega
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeay, didn't have to wait that long. if only every good story i read on affn was as quick as this one.(ahhh, sigh dreamly lol)
and like every other story not finished, NEED MORE, MUST HAVE MORE!!!(mindless zombi) Hope you will update soon.

Peace & Love BastardOmega
person BastardOmega
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
do u know how long i'v waited for that update? anyway thank u for finally doing it. Plezz don't take so long next time k? O by the way don't forget stranded!!!

Peace & Love BastardOmega
person BastardOmega
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I forgot Instinct, don't forget Instinct and it's lemony goodness.

Peace & Love BastardOmega
person emmet849
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it took so long to review! I loved this chapter. I feel that Kagome and Inuyasha still have a lot to work out between them, but at least now they can. The lemon was very good...almost needed a smoke after that one, phew! LOL. Keep up the good work!
person Artemis
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!!! really good, loved it ^^......but at least Kagoem could have lasted longer....

Kai: She's a chick

Artemis: so she's strong willed...on well she can take me anyother time ^^
person Anonymous
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please take a moment to correct the spelling error in your summary. 'captavaited' is not a word and it leaves a rather glaring sign that you do not have good a spelling ability.
person mel
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i was so crying just now. inu cant leave kags on land. is he crazy? please update again soon.
person emmet849
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!!! You can't just leave it there! The angst! Wonderfully done, my dear! I am really feeling for Inuyasha and Kagome. They come from two completely different places in life. I think this is one of your better chapters, I was so emotionally involved from Kouga to Kagome to Inuyasha. My heart was bleeding for all of them! Can't wait to see what else happens