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by OriginalSinner

person qutie1
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read this story cause of what i saw it was about.plus i wanted to see if you'r a good writer and you are!
Not like you needed me to tell you that.I realy liked it i usally dont read long stories but any way thank for all the help you have givin me.**take care**^^
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schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a delicious little story this is-- very hot, very sensual. I am thoroughly enjoying it. Your writing is clear and compelling, and your descriptions are quite vivid and on the nose. Sesshomaru as controlling seductor is right on the money. I am a huge fan of the Sango/Sesshomaru pairing (I am the writer of Demon Slayer Sango in this same section)--the arrogant youkai and the youkai hunter are a power couple if there ever was one.
Thank you for your kind words about my story-- it was actually posted before on AFF, before the big meltdown. I am reposting it here since I never had it under the Sess/Sango category.
I look forward to reading more of your wonderful story, and hope you can update soon.
person Anon
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you're updating this one, PLEASE tell me you are going to update "Lessons in Lust"?!?!

I love both of your stories, your smut rox my sox.
person LdyMoon
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story, I like the smut...It was funny to see both reactions from Kagome and Sango when Inuyasha yelled. I was laughing, but, no, I like where it's going and I want to see more, so, update.
person swissnights
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i see your back on line so WHY HAVE YOU NOT SENT ME AN E-MAIL????????
person Pana255
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm lost weren't we more ahead in the chapters. O-well! I like what ya did with the chapter can't wait for the next one
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Let's see, here: I woke before noon for once, spent time with an old friend of mine, and have now discovered that OriginalSinner has returned to AFF.



Yep.



This is a good day. Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!


person Begger195
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please update
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is wow girl. Me reading your lemons makes my husband a very happy man ~_^
person Dawna Chan
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey I understand, as a fanfiction writer myself I know what its like not having enough time to type. I hope that you had a good christmas and a happy new year. now. GET THAT CHAPTER UP! I'm just DIEING to see what fluffy is going to do next. lol btw, congrads on your bouncing baby boy!

Dawna Chan