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for What Now?

by OriginalSinner

person RuriRuri
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WAHH your fic is GREAT!! hahaha i LOVVE IT!! haha because of this fic i will definitly have a little playful click with sess and sango! hahah OH YAH! and yenno yer fic inspired me! and so i know how my plot will twist and uhm.. make a good story! YES hahaha i love it! THANX for your wonderful review! haha you and chigirl! its as if.. im writing just for you! *maybe* hahah well actually im partly writing because of your inspiration! haha i cant say it enough! hahha but anywayz! thanx!
person RuriRuri
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh yah i forgot.. UPDATe!! evvil i swear evvil! hahah good job tho ur REALLY good!
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Extremely interesting storyline and comedic as well...what more could anyone ask? *****
person Anon
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am reading this waiting for your Lessons in Lust update. This is so col. Iwish I had have read it sooner. Sango and Kagome getting off on each other. Wow. This is good. I should have known it would have been. At least I have more to read while I wait for the new update for lesson in Lust.
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there Lannabelle :) Big smiles from me to you. I bet that I would be the last person you would be expecting a review from. I read all the bits'n'pieces in your little note book and realized you were a woman of many talents. I didn't however realize that this little site that you frequented quite often while you were staying with me contained such a delightful array of horny stories, of which I'm even more shocked to find that you attributed to. And then to find that you had quite a following blew me away completely. Well, I guess not so completely. Nothing that you do really surprises me. You know that what you do you do well, therefore I guess that should go with every facet of your life, not just the bits that I know about you. You introduced me to Inuyasha, and anime in general, and now, I have to give you thanks for introducing me to this devine site. What an alter ego we seem to have darling. Evil girl... Just makes me like what I see even more.
person KishaW
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If I thought the first version was dynamite. Whoa!!! God what I wouldn't give to be Sango for just 5 minutes. I pride myself on being, ya know, the whole independant black woman thing, but god! Sesshoumaru could do anything short of...Hell Sesshoumaru could do anything to me!!! I think all women, especially strong ones love to be dominated, atleast sometimes. A guy that really knows his way around the sack. I'm gonna go search for my magic lamp now. I wanna appear as a character in one of your stories and my trusty genny's gonna help*lol* Please update soon!!! Can't wait for the new stuff. Hell, I'd beg your ex just to get my fic fix!!!!!
person silent pluto
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmmm this is one of the most sensual lemons I'ved ever read!
You soo have to update!
person PinkRoseBouquet
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another incredibly wonderful chapter. It just keeps getting better and better. Talk about hot! Whoa...Sessh is one sexy puppy in this story. Keep it coming, please!
To answer your questions about Demon Slayer Sango, the story posted in this section isn't especially different from the older one-- I have done some work cleaning up the prose so that it reads more easily. So if you want a better proofread story, I'd continue reading the chapters as they are posted here. Thanks so much for your kind words about my writing-- the sentiment is totally reciprocated. You are a talented writer, and I am tempted to steal some of your techniques!
person LdyMoon
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Original Sinner you did it again...left at such a climax....If I were Sango I'd wonder the same damn thing, why in all the hells are you beating my poor bottom up, whatever did it do to you? It was well written looking forward to your update.
person KishaW
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As always, I loved it. You could give me more than a few tips. Most writers don't give Sesshou a sadistic sexual side. It so hot in more ways then one! Cold regal Sesshoumaru, a real freak in the sack! You'd think he'd only do it from the back or missionary. Please keep it comin!!! Can't wait for the newest chapters! I have the story on my other computer. Unfortunately, it's in Virginia waiting to be shipped to Chicago. I really miss it. My laptop's great, but it's just not the same.

Keep it coming babe,

Chigirl