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for What Now?

by OriginalSinner

person Mirror
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I just love it when they have actual thoughts and consequences instead of "It will be okay" and "Happily Ever After". It's very realistic and enjoyable. I can't wait to see what happens. Will InuYasha appear and save her? Will she die? Will both Sesshomaru and Sango perish at his hand? *giggles with glee* The possibilities are endless. I can't wait to see what you choose to happen.
person Pyro290
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Incredible..just incredible!! I LOVE ITTT!!! And it was just wat i was looking for too :)
I wish u much luck with trying out the Vegeta/Sango ficcy! I cant wait to read it ^_^
person SchizoxPsycho
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooo you cant kill Sango.
Omg I dont know why but all the thoughts in Sesshomaru's head are making me tear up.
This was such a deep chapter in the story. I loved it.
Whatever you do with your story I know I will love it.
person Riku
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you sure this is your first fic? I love this!! It's very...perverse (i really am a pervert) but nice. Oh...the end of chapter of 8 is so sad...don't make him snap her neck. Don't. Nuh-uh. If you do, I'll strangle you and jack your wallet!!
person Marlingrl
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was excellent! Heck this whole fic is amazing. It's well written, the pacing is great....the only thing I don't like, but I understandi, is having Sesshoumaru's thoughts dominating so much of the story. It does make you wish for a tad more action and interaction between Sess and Sango. But overall, it's still a great fic and I'm really looking forward to the next installment!!
person kai
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh no, don't kill her, sesshy!!! don't do it!!! interesting turn of events, i like it! update soon!!
person Alex
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're not going to make Sesshomaru kill Sango are you? I feel like I want to cry right now, can't you make Sesshomaru understand that again he is thinking of himself. I know he is thinking about Sango, but not a whole lot, since he is going to kill her. It would be nice if he just let's her live, and forgets about him mating her, than kill her. That would be better than him murdering her! But, it is up to you though, although I don't want Snago to die. See, you're making me cry, and that's so sad. Update soon so I can see if Sesshomaru murdered his own mate. Overall good, I love it, just don't kill Sango. Than I'll be happ, but overall I'm happy you updated, THANKS!
person kagomereborn
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the fuck?!!!!....And all this time I thoght My cliffhangerrs were cruel and unusual....You leave it there....The Author can see the winding down paragraphs twisting in the familiar pattern to reach cilmax but the reader still clings to the hopes of more.moe ...as even that is hypocritical as a true reader knows that they hav an apitite forever insatisfiable ...... I today have become the reader....*tears*.......
person Atropa
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasps in emotional disarray...*
This was a very beautiful written chapter... It gives you insight into what the almighty Fluffy boy might be experiencing.
And that cliffy.... *growls* Ahhh, but I know that this chapter must have taken a lot out of you.... I know I would have spent a week in bed after a one like that.
You know me - thumbs up!!
person Jade Rose
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO You must update!!! NO dont do this or shess will punish you! Wait... after your done he will punish you! (though its not much of a punishment! ) n.~ But update ! Update at your quickest! (wait I dont think that made sense.) Oh well do it anyway!