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I LOVE how you made Sessh seem so cruel when deep down he really cares about how Sango feels
-Squee-
I cannot WAIT until your next chapter! Keep up the awesome work!

wow this is very good. love the dept you put into this

WOW THIS IS REALLY GOOD, PLEASE UPDATE!!!

Pure evilness.

This is a VERY good story.

Please continue.

Hi,
I hope you will finish this story. it is soooo good...cant wait for next pieces of their meeting.
cheers, AM

This is the first Sango/Sesshoumaru that I've ever read, and let me tell you, I have absolutely fell in love with the pairing! It seems to work so perfectly the way you put it! Very nice writing. I can't wait to see your later work.

This story hits every desire we women dare not admit. I'm not sure anyone could beta your work, it would be like trying to copy the gods.
I've already started some digi art on this, though I'll never admit the story that made me do it. ^_~ <3

Another good story Original Sinner. And here I was after reading through some of the reviews that you have left on other authors stories, that you weren't so fond of Kagome? Oh well, it seems you have made good use of her character in this story. So, Sango and Kagome are groping eachother in the hot spring and Sesshoumaru is spying on them like a pervert, hidden in the trees. Very mischevious hahaha. Now who has walked in on them? I'm thinking it's Inuyasha, but then again, it could be Miroku. The plot is thickening quite well XD

Original Sinner, I must say that I am finding this story to be quite enjoyable. Firstly, I have to tell you that I like the fact that the chapters are quite lengthy. I truly love the way you have gone into detail and ina few places, especially in chapters 3 and 4, could almost feel what Sesshoumaru and Sanog where feeling. Secondly, I like how you've kept the characters pretty much to their original portrayals. Sesshoumaru is often written quite out of character. I like how you have kept him in character. A Sesshoumau without stoicism or arrogance would not be Sesshoumaru at all. I believe that these attributes are what makes his character so delectable. And thirdly, I like your dry sense of humour. Especially in chapter 2 with the conversation between Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. The 'ugly bastard' and 'deformed idiot' lines were quite comical. I could almost see a vein pop out the side of Sesshoumaru's head at being called an 'ugly bastard' lol. Now, the hunt.... Well, that is what dreams are made of. I shall have happy dreams tonight of being hunted by an unearthly Adonis and being tackled to the ground and ravished. Lucky Sango! Sadly I must retire. This story will be added to my favorites and I will return again to see what transpires... Great writing.

wow, you know i've read both stories you've written all before you werent able to get to a computer for a very long time, so i was so surprised when you updated, i love both stories, your a really talented writer and i hope that you update this and lessons soon! i do know up to chapter 12 in this story, but let me tell you, being that its been soo long since i've read it, i reread the chapters that you've updated and there really good! hope to read more soon for both stories! Keep up the great work!!
~Translucenttears~