rate_review Reviews

I'm really anxious to read the bestiality, and (I hope) a little more of yaoi, and the harsh taking of Kagome. You write very well, especially the hot stuff.Plase, please continue.

Wow... it sure lived up to its title. I like! But next time, please don't use so many "-----" for a separator, because it really stretched the page, and I hated having to scroll across to read it.

I think the story has promise, but I would like to make some obnoxious suggestions, if you don't want to read them thats fine be more descriptive. If you want this fic to be horrorfieing (spelling?)
then describe inuyasha just as he looks in the manga and TV show, but say it like he is a monster from the most greusome horror movie you ever saw. Maybe describe his victims, whoever they may be, a bit more before the attack. "Filler" is spoken of with scorn in high school and colllege (or another countries equivalent) in most places, but in stories it is what makes it fascinating instead of interesting.
Sorry for making some dumb suggestions, it wasn't my place to do so. In the end I really like you writing style and think this story will make a great Drama or horror fic, or any combination of the two.

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So Inuyasha is now starting his own harem? anyway I don't believe he will share his "toys". Could you kinda hmm fuckin' kill Sesshomaru (and Kouga)? Please Please Please

Wow, pretty twisted. I like it though.