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for My Turn

by la89801

person animelover
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story plz cont. i would love to read more.
person kyttyn
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey this is a good story if you're still caring about this story as in you still work on it, please add another chapter and where did you put the first story to this i forgot the title.thanx,
kyttyn
person seshy is#1
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write more soon or else!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person kitten cat
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the first chap hope u'll write more ~ kitty cat ~ see ya
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Romance grl!
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so far i'm interested in this little game sesshomaru and kagome are playin. Keep up the good work love it so far, notify me when the next chapy comes k!!!
person cricket
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it!! more soon!!
person SaphireJade
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed your other stories and the first chappie here was such a tease! Please update soon! ;)
person Hamsta Gansta
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT! I really like it and i think it has a lot of potential! it's really got me hooked and i can't wait to read the next chaper. Might I suggest one thing though? Watch your spelling and grammer. I know we've all been told that (i still get told thatby my english teacher! i hope he's joking...) millions of times, but yeah. When you type, it's easy to make mistakes. i do it all the time... Oh and also try to watch your word usages. Lik to and too. or twoand toooooooooooooo!

Yeah. I love it so keep writing!!! ^-~
person lost child
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
two words to tell you what I think of your story.......update soon. That was awesome! I want to read more! update soon please?