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please continue! I can't wait to see where it is going

i hope those were good things on your mind,
i love the story

I loooooooovvvvvveeeeee it! Baby Inuyasha sounds soooo cute! I can't wait to see how the rest of the family reacts to him once they actually meet him. I also find it interesting that you kept Sesshomaru's mother alive. Most people kill her off so that Inuyasha's mother can come into the picture. Makes me curious, are you going to have it similar to Saiyuki's Gojyo, where the mother raises her husband's love child but is sad and upset by the child so much that one day she atempts to kill him. Also why did Sesshomaru and Inuyasha's father cheat if his first wife is still alive and well? Is it because she's not compassionate like her son? Ohhhhhhhhhhhh all these thoughts make me even more excited to read what you're going to write next. Please update soon! But no pressure! I know you can't rush a genius.

oh wow that was great. keep it coming

I loved your story so far and I like how this story actually has a developing storyline instead of just the usual, oh look they're in love lets make lemon juice. I admire your use of imagery and your charachter anaylsis. Very good. ^^

Cool story. Can't wait for more. Love how you had InuTaisho ban SesshoMaru from going near InuYasha. That was pretty smart. ^-^

Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet. ^_^ Update update update. I want to know what happens next. Please?

Nice beginning and the second chapter has a good ending. I guess you changed some stuff around but continue writing nontheless.

I really like this story and I'm really intrested to find out what happens next so please update soon. I would also ask if you would take a look at my story. Hated but Loved, and Apples don't fall far from the tree. I'm thinking about making a third part so it will be a trilogy. But anywhoo I really do like your story so please update as soon as possible!

^_^BYE,Isis

So much emotion! I feel sorry for everyone in Inutashio's family, expecially for the soon to be arriving Inuyasha.