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for Never Hatred

by calenloke

person Devious Lil Devil
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwww. the sweetness, please continue, you're doing beautifully. ^__^
person Demitria Miriam
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! I can't wait for the next installment! I wanna see how Sess an Inu interact! Have they interacted at all by this 5 year mark? Ooo! Update soon!

-DM
demitria_miriam@hotmail.com
person Deity
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy that you had updated. ^_^ I had to actually look back through the chapters to see if I had skipped a chapter before I read the sixth one, I didn't want to spoil anything that you had written... and as it turns out, I had read the previous five... it's just like me to forget something like that too. ^_^ Anyway, beautifully written, excellent chapter. And I loved every bit of it. You've done a wonderful job so far, keep it up! ^_^ The holidays and school were hectic for me too. ^_^ Please update soon! (Or whenever you have the time) Well, until chapter seven is posted, Bye! ^_^
person Fox
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O aww baby inu. Can't wait for thr hatered to turn into hot smexing. *giggles*
person monkeygirl
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty good but it's a slow start.
Keep going.
person Go Elsewhere
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still haven't updated? Ugh! You're just doing this to torture us now, aren't you?
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE ALREADY, DAMMIT!
person I Love Twins
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hope you don't mind, but I HAD to recommend this story to some people. It's just so well written, I've never seen this angle before!

^_^^_^! (I Love Twins!)
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really well written.

I felt a moment of panic when Sesshomaru started biting his father's head off in one of the previous chapters, it's just like "no, no, no, NO! Shut UP already, you're going to get yourself killed!" But you made it smooth itself over as the story moved on.

Also, I thought you should know, Inuyasha's mother's name is Izayoi, not Hiko. Unless, maybe, you just wanted to invent your own character to play the part.

Anyway, other than that I am really loving this story, so please, please, please, PLEASE update soon!
person loke
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kaorustalker30

Thanks for the review. and thanks for the correction. You actually got the wording right. I was totally stumped there. Thanks. And for the mother gasping....it's because Inuyasha's eyes were so (this is going to sound cheesy...but) well...hypnotic. Something like that. As for the scent that calmed Sesshoumaru, it's Inuyasha 's scent. Sorry for the mix up. Thanks for the tips....it's was reviews are about right? Later