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December 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please finish this really good story.
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April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
.. Wow.. all of the chapters were so good! Really great story, can't wait to see what happens next!
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What is up? It's been well over a year and nothing! What happened to you? Please come back and finish! B reading U!
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September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the story is interesting. i have to admit, koga was a surprise. apart from a few typos and verb tense mistakes, it was done well. i hope you continue. i will be looking for updates
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello Author,
I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.
About the site:
Yaoi-ai is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.
Your story is linked at http://yaoi-ai.com/index.php?showtopic=91. If you would like it to be removed from the site or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.
Vague
Administrator of the Yaoi-ai
http://yaoi-ai.com/index.php
I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.
About the site:
Yaoi-ai is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.
Your story is linked at http://yaoi-ai.com/index.php?showtopic=91. If you would like it to be removed from the site or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.
Vague
Administrator of the Yaoi-ai
http://yaoi-ai.com/index.php
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January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed this story. I loved that you started from when they were children. It would be really great if you could continue the story. I have one question though. Is Inuyasha and Kouga lovers or do they just like to share the occasional kiss every now and then? Email me if you are going to continue with the story. Thanks!
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i was hoping that the author would have found the time to update.
well, in my mind the story continued, and of course he didnt die
but afterwards, i dont know. how do they get together?
hmmmm.... would be nice... the set-up is already there, inuyasha's scent
is obviously a balm to sesshoumaru... just the how to get there is missing.
i hope this fic hasnt been abandoned .....
well, in my mind the story continued, and of course he didnt die
but afterwards, i dont know. how do they get together?
hmmmm.... would be nice... the set-up is already there, inuyasha's scent
is obviously a balm to sesshoumaru... just the how to get there is missing.
i hope this fic hasnt been abandoned .....
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry up. It is a amazing story.
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i normally dont review until the thing is at least half done
the reason for that is that i like to leave the author a lot of leeway
in character/plot development.
anyway.
i hope you update soon.
the main event isnt posted yet.
your story can go two ways -
inuyasha loses - and thus we have canon
but then you werent following canon - (inu tasho is alive!)
so then inuyasha wins - and sess gets more irritated
after all, despite the scent inu emits,
the character of sess doesnt want any weakness
and his yearning for inu's scent is a weakness
thus, inu wins - gains some sort of stature
and then you'll put in your plot twist
i dont know that...
just wanted to say that there is good development
the yearning - and conflicts (in the mind and heart of sess)
is clear ....
*sigh* and thus, i hope you update soon.
the reason for that is that i like to leave the author a lot of leeway
in character/plot development.
anyway.
i hope you update soon.
the main event isnt posted yet.
your story can go two ways -
inuyasha loses - and thus we have canon
but then you werent following canon - (inu tasho is alive!)
so then inuyasha wins - and sess gets more irritated
after all, despite the scent inu emits,
the character of sess doesnt want any weakness
and his yearning for inu's scent is a weakness
thus, inu wins - gains some sort of stature
and then you'll put in your plot twist
i dont know that...
just wanted to say that there is good development
the yearning - and conflicts (in the mind and heart of sess)
is clear ....
*sigh* and thus, i hope you update soon.