AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Unexpected Places

by Pocahontas20

person Peacemaker
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I meant chapter nine sorry but good luck.
person Anon
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh! nice! i couldn't figure out who she was at first... anyhow, great last chapter! update soon!
person let
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome I really enjoy reading this story and hope to see more soon!!!!
person Peacemaker
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ch.8 was another great chapter and I didn't see the Shippo plot twist coming. Kudos to you for making it work very well. I was just wondering how long that you intend the story to go before Inuyasha finds out that Neara is his 'dream girl'. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please. P.S. thanks for the heads up on the new chapter and hope to be reading chapter nine in August.
person lithium88
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey!!! sry for commenting 7 chapters into ur story, but i just got around to reading it today! ^_^ i like!!! it's different, refreshing actually! dont get me wrong.. i like the usual kagome, inuyasha, miroku, sango, ....etc theme, but this one is proving to be quite intriging. *hands over a piece of pie* everyone deserves pie after getting thru writer's block... trust me *grins* well anyway good job with the story and all, update soon! i'll be waiting , t.c. bye
lith*
person Peacemaker
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.7 was magnificent and I thank you very much for getting done with this chapter so quickly. I'm glad I am able to help you write by my reviews. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
person Peacemaker
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.6 was a very good chapter and it helped to fill in some of the questions that I had about Neara and her past. If you were wondering I am a 20 year old male. Thanks for the compliments and I'll keep reading, if you keep writing okay. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
person let
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome!!!! glade to see you back and to see an update, hope to see more soon!!!!!!! this story rocks!!!!!!!!!
person amhor56
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BRILLIANT!!! I absolutely love this story!!!Please update soon! Your killing me!!! You are an amazing writer!!
person Peacemaker
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.5 is another great chapter, I didn't catch any grammar errors and that means that you take yuor writing seriously. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?