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for Unexpected Places

by Pocahontas20

person neice1176
schedule September 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am loving your story and I hope you complete it. I usually don't read OC stories but yours drew me in. Please keep up the good work.
person DarkjX39
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just came upon this story and I must say it has captured my interest. And you are right, I can definitely tell that your style has changed, for the better! Please continue. I am excited to see where this cliffhanger will lead. :)
person Twisted
schedule January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was great :)
person Peacemaker of the Phoenix Soul
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just realized that I had forgotten to leave a review the first time I read chapter 14 hehe so here it is. Miroku has arrived and it should be fun to see what he brings to the story. I am looking forward to reading about what happens next in the Neara/Inuyasha relationship :) Keep up the great work and update when you have time please!!!
person wudelfin
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
now this is a good au of the series. so where the rest? hmmmm?
person Peacemaker of the Phoenix Soul
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man is it good to be reading UP again!!!!!! Great to have you back IL20 and this chapter was easily up to par with al of the rest :) Great amount of action and emotion; I am greatly looking forward to reading what happens next. Keep up the great work and update when you have time please.

P.S. It is I peacemaker but I had the title of the guilde I am in added to the end :) Peace out!!!!
person Peacemaker
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.12 is here and it was very good. We finally get to meet Naraku in person and maybe the part we talked about will be happening in the next chapter or so. Keep up the good work and email me if I can do anything to help.
person Peacemaker
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another fantastic chapter and it is good to hear from you again. The story is moving along nicely and I can't wait to see where it goes fom here. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
person Peacemaker
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.10 was the best chapter yet, the amount of detail put into it was great. Neara's moves very much to my liking and we finally got to meet Hiten at the end there if my suspicions are correct. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
person Peacemaker
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.10 was another great chapter and we got a look into Neara pat which I thougth was written nicely. I can't wait to see what happens in the chapters to come but, I have my suspicions of what it could be. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.