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October 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update.
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this sounds like the start of a good story, i hope you update it soon.
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its a good story, but you need someone to review and edit it, if you cannot do it yourself. Please be considerate and edit your story before you post it.
Please continue, anyway.
Please continue, anyway.
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its really good
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
maybe you should break things apart into paragraphs...it was very hard to decipher
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More more more. Add me plz.
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its a good consept.. you should make him work harder to see her smile and much harded for her to willingly submet make her will strong. update soon
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it but u made a lot of mistakes which made it kind of confusing like you kept refering to kagome as isis im not trying to be mean just thought id let u no anyway update soon.
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good! hope you update soon!
schedule
May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You need to break your story into paragraphs.