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person aaaaa
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ii hate kouga an i hate kouga x kagome fics even more even though this wasnt one for them it had em! lol anyway i wish she coulda seen how much of a bitch she was maybe let her see her death coming anyway great story lol they need a babu sitter *wink wink
person Inu_shommaru
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
for once in my pathetic outkasted life i am speechless. that was just beutiful, for some reason i am a sucker for child birth and or raising scenes*whipes tear from eye*i am friggen in love with u and ur stories its..its...damn it,*looks up int the sky at presumily god*how could you make roaches and rats, but not a word to express the beuty and loe radiating from this fanfic and entire collection, huh!?*looks back down at u*sorry had 2 rant anyway..its just beutiful and lovely,i truly feel sorry for those sexed crazed bastard/whores whocome in here to just wack off and or finger there friggen self into paralysis and cant see this story's beauty.btw i changed the title of the fic im working on to"The legend of inu-shommaru:the legendary three tailed dog demon"pairings are still Inu/Aya, anywho just keep up this ficlet series and i didnt mean to offend any people who come in here and read then find themseles.....'going solo'
person Inu_shommaru
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to menton that i was sorry for offending people i think, and that i am a guy as well, but that was fuckin' god forsaken and ultumitly the most beutiful fic if i ever saw one better than night time, though i have to admit inu mating with a demon is more appealing to me than him and a human, especially kagome she fuckin sits him when shes bored just to do somethin,the poor guy has a short temper and then she sits him20x or more and then runs her scrawny ass down the well as not to face his wrath.....damn bitch er,.....hmm a more descriptive word...ooh how 'bout SLUT,she goes off with hojo,kouga,and inu and she looses it when he sees kikyou remindes me of 'in the closet' by R.kelly anyway b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l anybody who says oppositely can go to sub-hell...i dont want to see u in hell nor in heaven haters!!
person Inu_shommaru
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a beutiful story indeed one HOT lemon but beutiful none-the-less good job
person DarkLiger
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great stories, some of the best ive read.

P.S. More Inu/Ayame stories pleeeaaaassseee!! :D This has quicky become my favorite Inuyasha pairing with Inu/Sango a close second.
person tOkYoPoPsTaR
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
alright! i think they go really well together! well, not as well as Inuyasha/Sango, but they still go well together. you havent updated in a month. i want to read more, so i'll help you out by giving you an idea for the next story.

Summary: Ayame is the most popular girl in school. She rides motorcycles and loves to race and make high-end bets, and all of the men love her, but she only likes the one who doesn't seem intrested in her, Inuyasha. Inuyasha is the "outkast" of the school, and all the women hate him, all except one, Ayame. When these two get together, what will happen? what will the school think?

there you have it. i bow down to your greatness.
person lona
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update. i have been waiting for you to update for a while now. I will understand if you have priorities that need to be taken care of first but as soon as you are done, update. Thank you
person OriginalSinner
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! *gushes* I love this pairing... and I really love the last story... it's so sweeet.
person Kiranta
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 exceeded my expectaions. Keep it up. And if I do see your muse, I'll make sure she's returned to you with some minimum damage.
person ldymoonluvsinuyasha
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, they have a future. I like it. I'm feeling it. They do make a cute couple but who in this whole story takahashi wrote doesn't look good together?