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for Amber and Emeralds

by Atropa

person Aisu
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very Nice Storys so far, cant wait for update
person Duran the Warrior
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked your Inuyasha/Songo Collection and look forward to this one as well, you can craft many interesting scenarios....that and I like unusual couples..... I really do hope that you bring more of this one!
person DarkNinja
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
w00t awesome dude :P

but it confused me a bit when the second "chapter" started O.o i thought it was "sequel" to the first, but it apparently wasn't =/

both chapters were good! I LOVE YOUR STYLE MAN! XD

the Ayame/Inuyasha pairring is sadly rare :( you help us all dude :P

i don't think you went too much OOC with any of the charracters... i mean... sesshomaru aren't that bad... he takes care of Rin... if Sango was able to push the right buttons, that could happen in the show too :P

great story! i really hopes you will make a sequel to the second chapter ^.^ like when they have grown a bit... who knows? you do! :P


-DarkNinja
person DarkNinja
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uhh i forgot something...

how about making one where Inuyasha is being hunted by Sesshomaru, and when Sesshomaru finally gets Inuyasha, and have him unarmed, Ayame jumps infront of him and tries to save him? XD

PS: there don't HAVE to be lemon in all of them, do there? i am a bit of a pervert myself, but i also like looked around for good love stories, on www.fanfiction.net ect. a good pairring with those too, in a real romance story with lots of tears would be beuitiful :P
person reo
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! I LOVE THIS PAIRING!



your freind and fellow author,
reo


p.s. my muse is being bitchy too,so i know how ya feel
person TengetsU
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!!! YOU SUCK!!! YOU NEED TO UPDATE!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR LIKE, MY WHOLE LIFE FOR AN UPDATE!! UPDATE!!! it's been almost an entire year since you've updated, YOU NEED TO UPDATE GODDAMN IT!!!! UPDATE!! I HATE YOU!!! *cries* update!!!
person Blue
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I really like the Inuyasha/Ayame pairing... lol... This is a really awesome lemon... Keep up the good work...
person The Great Nabeshin
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this couple please continue.
person linkthe2nd
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
and this is WITHOUT your muse? I LOVE IT!!!
person Josh
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was awsome do more lots more Inuyasha Ayame pairrings are my fav Also if you do more make it a chapter story something were Kagome does something to hurt inuyasha and he finds comfort in ayame's arms and in the end they kill naraku somthing like that.