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for Mistaken Miko

by KorruptdWun

person Ikinokoru and her Sess Plushie
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Ikinokoru: I feel sorry for Sesshomaru, he has to deal with that whore kikyo. The Sess/Kik stuff made my eyebrow twitch. I so glad Kikyo's going to get whats coming to her. I hope she dieds a slow, painful, bloody death. God I wish kikyo dies in the anime.....and not revived or renewed or other shit.

*Ikinokoru graps a Kikyo plushie and ties it to a large stick. The large stick the Kikyo plushie is on is surrounded by logs and wood. Pours gasoline on wood, stick and Kikyo Plushie. Ikinokoru lights a match and drops it on a gasoline covered log. All the logs catch fire*

Ikinokoru: MUHAHAHAHAHA!!!! BURN KIKYO!!!! BURN~!!!!!!!!! ROT IN HELL YOU WHORE!!!! MUHAHAHAHAHAHA~!!!!!!!!!

*Ikinokoru dances around the large fire she started*

Sess Plushie: Kikyo needs to burn in hell forever and ever and ever....you catch my drift....

*Sess Plushie looks a Ikinokoru who is still dancing around the large fire she made. Both Ikinokoru and Sess Plushie look at the fire that is crawling on the grass towards them*

Sess Plushie: Ikinokoru....Kikyo's dead. Now put out this fucking wildfire you started....

*Ikinokoru graps a large hose and sprays what she thinks is water onto the fire. But the fire started to grow. Sess Plushie sniffs the air and his little chibish eyes get large. Ikinokoru looks at the building fire, then Sess Plushie, then the......Oh shit*

Ikinokoru: Holy cow shit!! It's gasoline!! RUN!!

*Ikinokoru drops the hose, graps Sess plushie and runs away before a large explosion happens. When Ikinokoru looks up from a bush she hid in her face is covered in dust, dirt, and other stuff. Sess Plushie peeks his head out from Ikinokoru's shirt he hid in.*

Ikinokoru: Well......Keep updating KorruptdWun.

*Ikinokoru falls backwards with swirly eyes and drool secreating from her mouth. Sess plushie is still in her shirt*
person Terra MB
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm inlove with your story!!!!! *^_^* please keep writing, I must know how Sess finds out! *>_<* this is the coolest fanfic I've read! I'm your number one fan!!!!! *^_^* I can't wait to see what that bitch Kikyo gets from Sess when he finds out! *^_~* I think he's so going to kick her ass!!! *^_^* YEY!!!!! *^o^* LOVE YOUR STORY!!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!! I'LL REVIEW AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*^_^* {{{{{DEATH TO KIKYO!!!!!!!!!}}}}}



JA-NE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *^_~*
person Terra MB
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you should have Sess's demon in side him end up finding out who Kagome is. And then Kikyo gets it!!!! *^_~*
person Shikonjewel
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I'm just hoping you add another chapter real soon. I just can't stand kikyo all over Seshomaru like that. Plz plz don't let us s and Sesshomaru suffer anymore!!!!!!!!!!
person fuzzy
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not to bad. Need to do more chapters. It would be nice to have a endding, beinging it for Kagome or not. Though I think that one for Kagome would match your story the best. Anyways GOOD JOB hope to see more.
person Shikonjewel
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story. Even though KIKYO
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person kaleos
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely riveting. I can't wait to see the next installment. And very much loving the Kikyo-bashing. You're great at your craft!
person lonelylulaby
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i can agree with you there kikyo is a B-I-T-C-H and needs to get her butt kicked i cant wait till i find out what the baby will be prabably a half breed but all in all i hope she gets what she deserves in the end and that is to ......................... freakin' die. *puts on happy face* now the story i like so far i just cant wait till you update and don't worry about feeling dirty writing lemons it's only a fantasy land that we can only dream of going or that's atleast the way i think of it *lol* well ja till next time ya do a chapie
person DragonApocalypse
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wowthat was really goodkeep up the great work and update asap