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for Ever After

by miyu557

person Anon
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Will Lady Takehiko get what she wants or will Miroku arrive in time to stop her? Hurry with the next chapter!!
person Sadisticxwh0r3 (is to lazy to log in)
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah and I bet you did that on purpose. The cliff, urg, the shame of it all. I loved the chapter though. What's her face is a fucking slut. And Sesshomaru and Miroku need to start making up sometime soon, well I don't really care, because I like the drama and I only want the slut to leave. Forever. For good. To parsish. To die. Yup. ^.^. Welps, that's about it. I hope you get better, and very awesome chapter. Bye
person vashta
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely abhor cliffhangers, please hurry! Great chap and I hope Miroku gets there in time, I know he will, you are not that mean! I like how you are slowly wearing Sess down, good job.
person Obsidian
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh . .my . .gosh . . .Hurry Houshi-sama!! Save your mate! My gosh i was on the edge of my chair . .please do not take too long!
person glaze
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello inu chan please finish this story I have waited for an update keep up the great work
person Misty
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like that it's not a normal(well as normal as some of the inuyasha pairing can be) pairing. It's different and really good.
person Obsidian Heart
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* for amazing . .. wow . . Sesshoumaru . . so cold . . . I am amazed you are doing SUCH a good job! Please, do keep writing this.
person Adrien
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God!!!!

This is one of the saddest chapter I've ever read.
Please hurry up with the next chapter for I'm dieying to know how things work out with Sesshoumaru and Miroku.
They so belong with each other. I love the way you portray them but *pout* could you leave Miroku-kun alone.
It's really sad to have him feeling all disgusted and all towards himself. He soooo deserves Love.
I mean he thinks he raped Sesshy...give him some peace.
person Bootsie
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Crying hysterically* Why inu-chan!? WHY?! *sigh* things had better start looking up for my little boy Miroku or I will be SO pissed. But I still love you and your stories! ^_^ Rin is the cutest not-real girl alive! I heart her! Hey are Ryu and Hikari gonna get some lovers. Cause I think it would be funny to show how their parents deal with that kind of "growing up" *snorts with laughter* Anyways! Update 'cause I love your stories! (Lost hopes too)
person Anon
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's not fair!! If anyone is at fault, its Sess! He'd the one who gave him demon blood in the first place, but to put all the blame on Miroku is wrong!!! Sess is such a bastard!!