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for Ever After

by miyu557

person Mollie
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for giving attention to me as a beta in the chapters that i've helped you with... it could get me more beta work. and i like being a beta!


on another note, i forgot to tell you this before... BUT YOU CHOOSE THE WORST TIMES TO INSERT A CLIFFY!!!! i was reading it, on the edge of my seat, literally saying 'oh my god... oh my god... no way...!' (i was in the library at the time... people were looking at me funny... >.<) and then... 'Good bye, you'll have to wait until next chapter!' but you should be happy you know when to end a chapter... it leaves the reader wanting more. kudos for that! i don't know... just thought you'd like to know that. i'll be looking foreward to the next chapter you send me! i love to see what twists and turns you insert into your stories.
Your eager beta,
Mollie
person crystaladept
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!! *falls even further off the cliff* You evil evil person! How dare you leave us with just that!

Erm... I loved chapter 11. I look forward to reading more.

BTW... do you think you could possibly e-mail me as you update your stories? My e-mail address is: crystaladept@hotmail.com

Thankyou,

CA
person wink
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh evilll you just ended it there. i want to know whos blood that is.
person Anon
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Is Miroku dead? What happened? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person Newtype
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Come on! There has to be more! PLease can we get more?
person Adrien
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The chapters were really great. I love the cliffie and I know you must be in great pain but *take deep breath* HURRY UP with the next one. Its a torture to wait for the next one to show up.
person glaze
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
miyuki love it please write more.
person Terry
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Darnit! Finish this! I dying of suspence! Sesshomaru needs to do some serious make-up!
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh!! great chapter! hurry sess!
person Obsidian
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go Miroku! . . . oh my please Sesshoumaru stop him . . .This is a GREAT story so far! Just awesome please do keep writing!