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for Ever After

by miyu557

person Anon
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh soo happy that a new chapter was added!!
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! An update! Sorry that i just reviewed but I just finished reading the 5th chapter! Anyway what kind of things will Miroku teach Rin first? History? Defense? Meditation? Religion? Philology? What about that Takehiko girl? You know the daughter of the Lord of the Esternland. Isn't she suppose to go over to Sesshomaru's castle? What will happen with her and Miroku. Is she going to be a bitch to him and little Rin. She's going to start acting like she owns the castle, isn't she!!!....ok....I'm going to stop with all the questions....*Sheeplish Grin* Well, can't wait for your next update!

Jaa Ne
person kai
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!! an update!! and a wonderful update at that! so he is to take care of rin then, interesting! i liked sesshy's lil slip, it was a nice touch!! i loved it, udpate soon!! bring on the lemon!!! XDDDDD
person Anon
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh what a filler eh...i can't wait till next chapter
person Rawben
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol... ohhh miroku. you have no idea what you've gotten yourself into... lol! this is great! did i ever tell you i love that you put kagome and sango together? that was a great idea... i dont normally read yuri, but i still think theyre kinda cute together. ;) great update! and i'm glad you're back at writing this!!
person Atocha
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! GO SESSHY!!!! Hehhe...I am such a perv but do hurry up and write some smut!
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really great. I love how the telepathic bond is throwing Sesshy out of his routine. Please continue!!!
person Eden
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loving this story but you have yet to update.............please update soon!
person tsukiyomi
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, I'm so excited to see what further occurences happen between Sesshoumaru and Miroku. Although I don't want to have to wait to read more, I could forgive you for taking a little longer to update on this story as long as you updated Lost Hopes. I love all of your stories that I've read thus far. You are truly a great writer, drawing out the emotions in your characters and making the reader feel them all.

Awaiting eagerly, Tsukiyomi
person blaze
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whyy please come on finish need to know what is going to happen with miroku and shessy