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for Ever After

by miyu557

person kerbear
schedule March 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story and has a lot going for it.I wish you'd write more for it,but you have not written anything
for it since 2005.So I would think that "yes" chapter 12 is the last chapter to the story.Though I will look in on it
from time to time to be proven wrong.(I hope) I'm not exspecting anything soon.
Nice story,you write well.
person shikalover_94
schedule October 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I beg you please please please come back and write more to this story!!! I cry wondering if you will ever finish it
person Kireania
schedule September 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So I seriously hope there is more. I've been reading this and your other stories for the past few days, and besides the few missing words and misspelled words this is a really cute story.
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Heeey, it's Mollie, your beta from long, long ago.
I was re-reading your stories for the thousandth time, and I realized that this story still needs an ending!
Are you okay? You didn't give up writing, did you?!

Please update soon!
If you need a beta, I'm always willing to help out again.
I'm much less busy than I was when I helped out before.
person Envi
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the ending with Sesshy's mama. All the fic I've read and she's in, she's a total bitch. It's nice to see a good side.
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yo Miyuki finish this great story or pass it along to some other writer cause I would like to know what will happen to Miroku and Shessy...............
person natasha
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story was great to readbut i really can't wait for somemore.
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is good is it over I thought one of the guys would be ya know with child or something
schedule August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is awsome! I can't wait for more!!
person vampirewulf
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i lvoe this story its so great. i hope you update it soon

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