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for The Cave of Delight

by BlueEyedWolfDemon

person syndey
schedule December 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Pleaz continue to update i really want to see was happens when everyone especially Kouga and Inuyasha find out Kagome's been lying to them. Hope they torture her and hurt her really bad. I wanted Kouga and Inuyasha to keep the pups as well it's so sad

person syndey
schedule December 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Omgeez I don't  mean to rush u but can u get to the part where  they find out Kagome lied and kill her because I really want her dead rite now

person Vampress
schedule August 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Excellent story with so Very Much Potential, Why did you not finish the tale? The same kind of events happen frequently in real life. I hope It was Inuyasha or Sessharmaru that caught her lying. Ayumi & Inu catch both her & Hojo in the threos of passion. Or her Diary is read by her mother & grandpa. O she leaves it out, Sota & friends finds & reads it. Oh the possibilities are endless. 

person syndey
schedule August 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Why isn't there a new chapter yet I wanna see Inuyasha and Kouga together hopefully Inuyasha is turned back into a female permanently and has Kouga’s pups. I read this so long ago I'm surprised there's no new chapters yet. Is this story discontinued? 

person syndey
schedule December 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Where is the next chapter I'm dying to see what happens to kagome when she's caught lying by both inuyasha and kouga. Oh I hope she gets killed for what she was doing
person syndey
schedule May 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter pleaz I love this story I am anxious to read the next chapter
person Starshima
schedule December 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
INCREDIBLE STORY!!!!!! DAMNNNNN IS THERE ANOTHER CHAAAPPPIIIEEE!!!! ARRRGGHHHHHHHH!!!! WAHHHHHHH INU&KOGA 4EEVVEERR!!!!
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! this is getting so intense!! PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE finish the story!!!! I'll even help u write it, if I need to! SO,SO,SO GOOD!!
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. I can't wait to what comes next. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee write more real soon!!!!!!!!!!
person tina
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
write more very soon i love the story i would like to know who is watching her.