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for If You're Not The One

by KogasAngel

person Kagehoshi
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha! Do you want fries with that!!! What a perfect ending for Kikyo. In one way I'm kinda sad to dee the story over since that means no more updates, but I'm glad everyone got closure. I wouldn't say no to a sequel.
person Rinseternalsoul
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can hardly believe it! It's over! It was a wonderful story. I really loved it. The snappy humor and the spiteful comments made me laugh so hard, and the lemons made my temperature rise. It was really great. I'm glad that Kikyo got hers in the end. It was nice to know that she was forced to fast food service. Poor gal. I almost felt sorry for her in the end. So everyone is married with babies? Sweet! Sesshomaru and Inuyasha are on speaking terms and Ayame is giving Kouga hell. What a perfect ending! I loved it all! As usual, a great job!

Hentai Sis
person Jazmine
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED HOW YOU DID THE ENDING! GREAT FANFICTION! EVERY CHAPTER!
person Hanyoukagome962
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha!!!! great ending kinky-ho got what she desevered. Im glad everything worked out ok though i wish this story never ended i feel the urge to cry coming on. Anyways AWSOME FIC I LOVED EVERY SECOND now you can focus more on something to talk about i really cant wait to see what you have in store for that story and the rest of your unfinished fics your and amazing writer.
person Amanda-chan
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED THIS FIC!!!! GREAT ENDING, JUST LIKE THE FIRST CHAPTER. IT WAS GOOD ALL THE WAY AND THE END WAS KICK-ASS!!!!! Maybe someday you'll so a story after? Hmmm... well anyways, just wanted to say YOUR KICK-ASS!!!! AND ONE HELL OF A FAN FIC WRITER!!!!! *hugz* Ja-ne!!!!

~Amanda-chan
person PJ
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story. I have started to feel a bit sorry for Inuyasha for all the crap Kikyou is pulling. I knoe he better put something in that contract that says if the baby isn't his that she has to pay back the money he paid her for those months. And what will happen when they find out she isn't pregnant? I hope they make her pay back the money for the rent and the allowance as well. I like the whole Kagome/Fluffy interaction I hope that she will be alright. I do see that she needs to be a bit more firm in her dealings with Fluffy and others as well. She shouldn't have to put up with that security guard making comments that is sexual harassment as well. Just because she is dating hte boss and they are trying to keep it from being known doesn't mean she has to take crap from others. And Sessy should say something as well... it wouldn't be playing favorites.... he fired Kagura for her comments to Yura and said it for sexual harassment so wouldn't someone making a comment Kagome be considered the same thing. If that guard would have made a comment to anyone but Kagome I bet he would have said something. And his lawyer needs a hard lesson as well. Anyway this is great I hope you make it so Kikyou ends up scrubbing bathrooms or something. Update soon.
person jingko
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the end, not that i want it too, but well, you get what i mean. at any rate wil lbe waiting for the next chapters.
person lost child
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter. ha, take that Naraku. I highly doubt he'll be getting off and as for Kikyo, boy will Inuyasha be mad when he learns she ain't really pregnant. I can't wait for that plus nor the reunion between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. Are you going to make Kagome pregnant too? I hope so, I'd like to see Sesshoumaru's reaction.
person Jazmine
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Naraku got caught!
person Sayuri-chan
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...wow...Naraku Onigumo thinks he can get out of all those charges? I highly doubt that considering Sesshoumaru is the one he screwed with by messing with Kagome. >.>;; Well, another notch chapter! Update when you can!
Sayuri-chan