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for If You're Not The One

by KogasAngel

person sendosha
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your story. A little Sesshoumaru- what a sight!
person chanda
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a great story... fantastic job.
person No Sugar Added (not signed in)
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I loved your story and hope you begin a new one soon. That was fantastic, and I liked the ending especially! ;-)
person PJ
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow I am sorry to see this story end but I guess everything turned out ok. I love Kikyo's job she is perfect for that. I am also glad Inuyasha cleaned up his act and did the right thing. He should have called off the wedding before it "got to the wedding" but still if he felt it wasn't right or his heart wasn't into the marriage then I guess he did the right thing. It was nice to see that he did say sorry and that he didn't intend to hurt Kagome. He wasn't being mean about it so I can forgive him we all make mistakes. Glad to see that he didn't let Kikyo get the better of him about the whole being pregnant stuff. Kikyo should have read what she was signing or had her lawyer read it first. Anyway great story and I look forward to updates on your other stories.
person kagonelover@
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT
person jingko
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow it's over.... well it was a good story, let me know if you write anymore 'k?
person Alleycat
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! ITS THE END?! WHAT AN AWSOME ENDING!!! *clouds open up and start singing Hallelujah* This has been an emotional ride, and I loved every minute of it. You are truely and utterly my all time favorate author. *give you blue ribbon, trophy, and plaque.* Congradulations of the ending of the greatest AU story I have ever read in my life. Thank you. ^_^
person mrs sesshy
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what a well thought ending! i'm going to miss this story.
person Seki
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awshum =]
person Sayuri-chan
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was completely amazing and I'm kind of sad to see it end. I wouldn't mind a sequel, but there wouldn't be much more to it, I don't think. The way you wrapped it up was great, and left me feeling quite satisfied with this story overall. You are an awesome writer, and this story was so much fun to follow through everything. Thank you!
Sayuri-chan