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for If You're Not The One

by KogasAngel

person Dee Dee
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was the greatest story I've ever read; the drama, the mystery, the murder, the desperation, not to mention the romance!! You should definitly think about writing a sequel, but let it be about their kids. If you decide to do it email me so that I can be one of the first ones to read the story!

P.S. You should definitly consider writing as a profession.
person bonodo
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
naraku's in jail, Kikyo's fat and misarable, and kagome's with sesshomaru i love a happy ending.
person Ray
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT!!!!!!
person Katty
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love all your stories!
person Liz
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are a genious! I thoroughly enjoyed this story. So much in fact that I just finished the last 20 chapters tonight. Literally. Thanks for keeping me up till 3am. No really! I love it. I read one of your other stories and enjoyed it as well and decided to read this one. I made a good decision to read it. Again, I love it. I really look forward to your other stories. You are a very good author. You take your time and don't half ass anything. I applaud you for it. You had me begging for more! You really caught the characters and I did not see any OOC. Maybe Kikyo, but I hate her anyways! I will hopefully be an author on here soon and would really love for you to critique my work. I hate to half ass around this but right now I have a case of writters block. Please tell me, did you write your entire story before you posted it? I'm up to Chapter 15 and don't know what I should do. Post it or not? That is the question. Anyways, I love this story and can't wait to read more. So please write!!!!!

Liz
person kace
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome story
person Luvspanky
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn! I no fan of Kikyou but you really did her wrong in this one! It was funny as hell, the lemons were perfect as always, and I love you so much!
person Subaru
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this story so much!!! Great Job!
person Anon
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellente`!!!

Love how this turned out.

Sel~
person niru
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey ya, its been so long and I finally got to read the ending of your story.It seems different reading it from this site.I miss the whole single spark thingy
well it was a real sweet ending...glad naraku got into jail...but I have to say that our hentai work is the best I have read in a long time
cant wait for your next story.your alternative universe stories are totally rocking

love ya work
keep writing

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