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for If You're Not The One

by KogasAngel

person Tai
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*takes a moment to feel sorry for kouga* poor kouga... well! now thats thats over! give me more update!!!! i love u!
person Kokuei
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God I love this story. Bless your gifted brain......................god I'm so tired I'm spurting out random things, I need to go lay down. I hope you update soon!
person animepunk93
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE this was getting intresting don't leave me hanging
person jingko
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow the last three chapters are really wonderful. please do not stop there, what a cliff hanger to leave u at. please continue the story.
person Kettricken
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah!

That was mean. On the other hand, I'd been waiting forever for an update, so I guess I can forgive you.

I was kind of worried about the lead-in to Sess and Kags at the club--initially, I thought maybe she was going to go totally frigid when she found out about the "sleeping arrangements" and that you were just setting him up for a fall. Then, I started to worry that Kagome was actually going to give in and sleep with him, and I'll admit I was a little affronted that you would make her such a weak character as to go against her principles that way. Yet, somehow, as I was reading, the feeling went away. I don't know how you did it, but you got Sess to shower her with gifts and attention, completely butter her up, start to make serious moves, and let Kagome accept them...and somehow this is okay. =) I think it had to do with her talk with Yumi; that was a nice touch when Kagome herself said that what really mattered was that her friend was happy with her choices. I'll be reading the last couple of chapters again more carefully--and anxiously awaiting the next one! Thanks for updating!
person kyoslover
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH welcome back! I am soooo happy to see you updated! and sexy Sesshomaru finally makes his move! If Sesshomaru was real and even looked at me I'd die lol! Please update asap!
person CM
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's just...GRRRR! I absolutely love your stories- you are a fabulous author and I'm glad your back from the weather imposed hiatus, but having Kag all messed up in her character sets me off. She always is described as virtuous and loyal and all of a sudden she's doing something that should make her a little bit uncomfortable and even scared and- damn it! ..but the story is one of my favs, as well as a few of your others...(I love Kags and Kouga and Sess! BOOYA!) So I'll just keep my peace (from now on in anyways) and probably apologize for maybe ticking you off enough to curb your story writing (GOD FORBID! and that's NOT sarcastic!) But yeah, it kind of made me mad to see such 'adulturous' actions made by the extremely loyal Kags, and well...I was hoping for Kouga getting cut off cleanly, but meh. ...I usually say keep up the good work...but I'll say; keep writing and I probably will be appeased (Gods I sound like some great giant beast ready to maim and gorge myself if I'm not satisfied with a sacrifice ...X] lol) if I see more of the ...plot/smut? lol. Yeah. Update your other stories too! I love 'Midsummer Night's Dream' and your one shot collections! So GO YOU!
person Laini
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH YAY an update..and now a CLIFFIE?!!..sigh..sheesh..oh well anyway,i love it very much ur doing a great job..PLZ PLZ update soon...*thinks*..like..REALLY soon..pwease???
person DarkMystic
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo There has got to be more darnit. *Sniffles* I wanna read chapter 14! *Jumps up and down excited.* Eeep! Its gunna be so funny when they sleep together. ^_^ Remember write me to tell me when the next update is up. Thank you so much, and might I add that you are a great writer, and im glad that inuyasha has gotten his revenge on kikyo, she is a real bitch in this fic and deserves every freaking thing she gets, *mumbles.* I never did like her... >.> Anyways update soon, and thanks.
person Jazmine
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT BITCH KIKYO GOT A TASTE OF HER OWN MEDICINE! TWO GREAT CHAPTERS, THAT'S SO AWESOME! I WONDER HOW SESSHOMARU IS GOING TO GET AYAME TO MEET KOUGA.