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for If You're Not The One

by KogasAngel

person jingko
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow chapters 15, and 16 are wonderful, please contine you story.
person Amanda-chan
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice way to leave it off! Damn... I was really getting into it to!!! Still loveing the updates! Cant wait to find out what happens next, hope it's a lemon!!!!!! A twist would suck at this point, lol. ~Amanda-chan
person Anon
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Angels start singing*

Kagome finally lost her virginity!!! WhoooHooo! I really must say you are an extremely good writer! You got some forshadowing, multiple story lines, and all the ingredeance needed for a awsome story! Thanks and update soon.
person a
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
now thats what im talkin bout!!
UPDATE REAL SOON!!!
person Anon
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was amean trick that clif should not be there you little bitch write more ass fuck ,shit i like the damn fic
person TAJE
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm just glad you've continuing your story. I know life's commitments are first. This story is so good. I must say, I love Kouga in this story. And Like always I see a grey picture for him. Any way, I guess your creative flow will let us know. Great Storytelling. You Go! Peace
person Sesshomarus Chix
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omfg you need to update soon i love it!!!! its sooooooooo hot!!!! i need to know what happens next!!!!
person Alleycat
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THANK THE LORD GOD ABOVE!!! YOU FINALLY UPDATED!

I was so happy you updated that I actually got misty eyed! And with 3 new chapters too! But please, I'm begging you, don't leave me hanging on a cliffy like that one for too long. PLEASE! The lemon I have been waiting for has finally arrived! So please be nice and update with the lemony chapter very soon!
person Kamui
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore your story...words just can't simply explain how wondrerful of a writer you are. I hope that you can update before Saturday, that is if I'm lucky. Thank God that you are back. Finally a story worth reading
person Anon
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
inu needs to lose Kikyo

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