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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
After reading only the first chapter I found your story to be riddled with spelling errors and desolate of emotion and description.
I suggest you revise over it and fix this. Without it, your story is nothing more than twelve year old fan-girl drawl.
I suggest you revise over it and fix this. Without it, your story is nothing more than twelve year old fan-girl drawl.
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UUUUUUUUUUUU. Must update soon. This story has caught my attention!!!
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Possessive vs. Plural:
Kagome's hand (the hand belonging to Kagome)
The shoulders (both shoulders--the body part).
NOTE: There is no apostrophe in plurals or verb conjugations! The correct title of your story is "Bad boy meets bad girl" (<--NO apostrophe!)
"ring": (verb) make a ringing sound; vibrate while making a sound; cause to ring...
Corrent verb conjugations: I t will ring (future tense). It rings (present tense). It rang (past tense). It has rung (perfect tense). It is ringing (progressive tense).
"rong" is not a verb. Please choose one of the above alternatives.
Kagome's hand (the hand belonging to Kagome)
The shoulders (both shoulders--the body part).
NOTE: There is no apostrophe in plurals or verb conjugations! The correct title of your story is "Bad boy meets bad girl" (<--NO apostrophe!)
"ring": (verb) make a ringing sound; vibrate while making a sound; cause to ring...
Corrent verb conjugations: I t will ring (future tense). It rings (present tense). It rang (past tense). It has rung (perfect tense). It is ringing (progressive tense).
"rong" is not a verb. Please choose one of the above alternatives.
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahaha never mind i remember now tehehehe cool chappy i cant wait for the next one to come out well see ya around!!!
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooo me like me like plezzzzzzzzzzzz write more
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked it!!!!!!!!!!! but i have questions are inuyasha and kagome going to be together? and is there going to be a nice kagome or a bad kagome or both but justs needs her good side to come out and have inuyasha by her side.
WELL KEEP IT UP AND PLEASE I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BYE!!!! and email me at inugurl1121@hotmail.com so i can know what happens next.
WELL KEEP IT UP AND PLEASE I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BYE!!!! and email me at inugurl1121@hotmail.com so i can know what happens next.
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hay cool story but your second chapter isnt showing completely can you fix it or can you send the next chapter to my email? well see ya hope to see ya again soon!
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When will so called authors learn that posting just a sentance does not equal a chapter. Though the story's sentance was cut off so this leads me to believe that it wasn't complete. But for you authors that are out there here is a tip that I normally use. When writting a chapter write in 8pt and once you reach a page then it will give your readers something to read and it makes them very happy. Also I recomend the font verdana but that's just me.
Shellbabe
Shellbabe
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?