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June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey jess i thought that it was a great story u should make more of the storys and tell me about them then i can read the storys but so far this is my favorite story yet remember make more storys like this and urll get better reviews.
love you always,
eric shurtliff
love you always,
eric shurtliff
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heeeeey you updated! tehehe interesting chapter well i gottsta go now its one in the afternoon and i still havent slept stayed up all night and morning tehehe
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luv this story i like it alot plzz continue this story i waz luving it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hope your arm feels better soon
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To the comments for the first 1 or two commenteers(HEHE..lol)...(ahahahhaa..commenteers..)Why post YOUR junk on someones review board?They tried or whatever and wrote,if you don't like it,shut up...?
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEY!!
nice story but please update soon!!!
nice story but please update soon!!!
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You might want to develope your writing skills a bit more before continuing the story. I do not find your plot attractive, but it's your writing style and lack of proper grammar that I find most appalling.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
look man, ur story sux. im sry but it does. u need to work on grammer, and lengthening it. otherwise, its good. i do like the plot though. dont give a crap about how long it takes u just make ur chaps more than a paragraph long. please