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Ehehehe, i loved this chapter, update soon please!

i have to admit, this story is really cute -- i wasn't sure i would like it at first, but it's grown on me very quickly. you found a very uncommon plot, and with time, i think you will develop your characters wonderfully. i can't wait for the next chaoter because i think thats when all the fireworks are going to start. lol, i have to admit, it's always fun watching the main characters suffer a little -- i know, i'm a horrible sick person, lol

AWESOME ABSOLUTELY AWESOME!!!! Plzzzz keep up the great work and update soon!

you have yo finish it wow cant get enough of your stories wow.

You have to update! You have to! It's so good. You can't stop now!

this is amazing it is very original i hope you do consider continueing please keep posting

Oh... my... god... man, and here i thought i had the corner market with original Inuyasha fanfics but now, now i see that i was wrong, there is someone out here who has a VERY good and original idea, much like i have.

What i mean by that is that this fic is extremely interesting and VERY original, it's only the first chapter but i already have a very strong gut feeling it will turn out to be very good and original, after all, i hold the title "King of Plots" so take it from me when i say this: You have major nuclear bomb like level of potential here, so don't you dare waste it, keep writing and i'll keep reviewing, maybe not each and every chapter but as often as i can.

Update soon, this has so much promise...

Well it certainly is orginal... Which is good... and all in all it's a great story so far! So keep updating!

wow... pretty good.... I like how you have approached the story... It is a fresh story line....I also like how you have Naraku is a so far a decent character.. THAT is really a fresh change... Your story looks promising... I will look forward to your next update...