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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You can SPELL!!!!
Yay for you!
Oh, and the story ain't half-bad. It's ... gooooooood...
Yay for you!
Oh, and the story ain't half-bad. It's ... gooooooood...
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL Very interesting so far, can't wait for the next escapades they go through, need another chapter up soon
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cruel fate of the world...it's not updated! Well, you better hurry it along. Please.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good idea, though that second chapter seems a bit... forced. I don't know, it was odd, very unnatural even. The way they just decided to wake up the girls, not to mention the fact that if they actually CAME out of the manga, wouldn't Miroku be IN Kagome's apartment as it was her volume that kind of 'magick-fied' ya know? *shrugs* It's original, though. Just seems a bit forced in places. The writing is fine, not a lot of grammar errors or anything, which is a very big plus.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like your fic and hope you advance in writing. it is indeed nothing that i have ever read before and wish you the best in continuing it!!!!
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor inu and miroku! how humourous! personally, i don't care if he was my ideal guy and out of a manga- any strange male who popped up unexpected in my bedroom would get a slap upside the head so hard, he'd be seeing yesterday! but hey, shock and all...
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! interesting! this is a very creative piece of work, now to find out where Shippo pops up! XD I really want to continue with Miroku and Sango more though, this is very interesting so I hope you update soon! and make the next ones longer! XD
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww this is cool, kinda like the Ah-ha video for "take on me", I've alwas been facinated by that video, I want to be pissy coz you beat me to this idea, but I can't because your's is turning out so well, and probably much better than mine would have.
Looking forward to a update!!
Looking forward to a update!!
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If Inuyasha is with Kagome, and Miroku with Sango, then where is Shippo gonna show up, if he does?
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I love the plot and writing style. Please update.