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for Ultimately Hopeless

by Gyousei

person Laurie Hall
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!!!! LMAO!!!!!!!! That's hilarious!!! Poor Sango....awww, that has got to suck!!! I would really want to be dead! First she gets caught, and then her family embarrasses her in the resturant. Not to mention the guy who caught her is the guy her family is embarrassing her with!!! LOL!!! You have to update. I loved it!
person sesshy_lover
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMGSH!!! I LOVE THIS!!! Pleaseeeeeeee PLEEEEEASEEEEE update another chapter!!!! I'm begging you!!! *Cries*
person LadyDraken
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The 2nd chapter was so funny i was on the floor laughing ^_^
person kaoru2153
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, I had red this story a long time ago. I can't wait to see what you do with it, it has a lot of potential. Please update it when you get a chance.
person Doxkid
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey i followed the directions and came to one of my other fav sites in the prosses. You rock!! now get back to work on MY STORY!!!!!
person Kim
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol, that was interesting!
poor Sango
You will probably get a million saying it but please update soon...
person shiko-chan
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hee hee this was really fun!

looking forward to the next isntallment. hope it comes... uh... soon. ^.^
person Sadie
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cant stop laughing!! please......*wheeze* please....*laugh* please....update soon!!!! *breaks out into a fit of luaghter!
person Miroku\'s soulmate
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!! that was very unexpected. PLEASE UPDATE CHAPPY!!!
person Miro_san
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful fanfic!!
what was up with that pie?? EWW!! That part was just plain gross!! haha!! Personally, I thought Kohaku would have a tad more innocence in him!! I wonder if Miroku catches her masturbating again??

Update soon please!