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I really like this story I can't wait till you update

please continue
this has a really nice flow to it
and i would really enjoy reading the rest
pleeeaaaasseee continueee *gets down on knees and begs*
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I dont care if your athor fans hate your work you wright better than i ever would! Trigun rules, (I think thats how you spell it!) but I've only seen it about five times. I hate when people cliff hang (bad person)! hope you wright more I'll be reading

love,
inu^-^girl



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I love this story, and your characters personalitly. Please update soon.

Thanks
Chanda

good storie i hope u update fast this is turning out to be very intresting

wow i reallt hate the wolf an this waiting is killing me .... i really hope that stupid wolf gets his ass beat an finds some othe girl... lol i dont want him to be in pain i guess but kagome is inyuasha's .. and her an kouga are just WRONG

mmm, loved it. Of course it would be more interesting if Kagome was a bit attracted to Kouga. More worry for Inuyasha and it would prompt him to make a move or something. Deep down he knows Kagome prefers him and so he's not really motivated to up the stakes.

Hi,
just finished reading the last chapter (#5) of disaster . I do understand why some of your fan's have been bitching . You are a great wrighter ( screw grammar, im french !!) . Anyhow, i cant wait for you to update. But i do also realise you have a life. Please keep up your great work. Im going to have to read all your Fic's soon ( after i finish my never endind list of "inuyasha thing's to read** the preceiding should be said in a resonant god-like voice**. Oh hey while im at it , any fic's about sesshaumaru??. Ok it's 3 am and my boy-frind is asking me if im going to be greating the sun this morning. Dont stop the fantastic work.

G'night , Val

very good

It's got some nice pace, so far. I don't mind OOC so much, but InuYasha's mouth is really foul. There's a difference between writing 'adult' works and swearing because you can. That's my only real complaint. Kouga's doing fine, and I like the idea of a double team, quite frankly. The part where he explains pack mentality is a little cut and dry, so it comes off flat and out of place. Revisit that if you get the time. I'd like to see where this is going and I like how you have Kagome responding. I laughed a bit at "Don't teach him to say that." Good diction choices in the last chapter. Flow is fine. Keep it up.