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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I just bumped in here at the Miroky/Sango section, only of curiousity. I found one of the best fics ever. Come on, I mean update this!!!
Shitza
Shitza
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ich habe auch viel probleme mit meine zeiten. Ich finde die zeiten und die grammatik sehr schwerig!! die relativ pronomen sind auch schlect. ich mochte ihr hilfe mit ihre Lemon. Ich schriebe ein solo mit sango in meine erste , uh chapter? Machen sie deine abitur dieses jahr? Wo wohnen sie? ich mochte nach deutschland nachtes jahre fahren fur die pokel um die welt??(fussball) es tut mir leid, meine wortebuch sind zeimlich klein.
ich kann nicht warten fur irhe nachtes chapter!!
ich kann nicht warten fur irhe nachtes chapter!!
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw man. no one's reviewin? that sucks. well, i really liked it, but i think you could get into their heads a bit more. it's a bit choppy. this should make the chapters a bit longer... but i love the plot! and i like that kagome and inu got together first... oh! and i like your reason for miroku's ass-grabbin. good job. update soon ;) ...i just dont get why people dont like mir/san pairings... they're so good! ;)
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ihre englischkenntnisse sind sehr gut!! Ich mochte ihre geschicte viel.
Ok we've established my german sucks, which is bad considering I have the equivilant to the abitur next month.
Your mixing up your tenses, they are harder in english than in deutsch, if you'd like, I can help, just to make it a bit more readable. If not that's ok.
Looking forward to an update!!
viel gluck!!!
Ok we've established my german sucks, which is bad considering I have the equivilant to the abitur next month.
Your mixing up your tenses, they are harder in english than in deutsch, if you'd like, I can help, just to make it a bit more readable. If not that's ok.
Looking forward to an update!!
viel gluck!!!