rate_review Reviews

It was a good story. I think you should do a chapter about in inu/kag only and a chap about mir/san only then go back to the format now. It is a good start though. Also have someone beta it for you. so your grammar will be better.

kool story its really good!!!

There is nothing stupid with grieving a lost animal. Myself i remember seven years ago, the day we found i was allergic too animals with fur. Both me and my brother couldn't eat that day, we simply cried. It still makes me cry when i think about it, because I miss him. he was a wheat coloured Cairn terrier, a nit stupid but really cute and always my guardian. We gave him away, I don't hear much from him anymore.

Thinking of that your experience must have been six million times worse, so take your time updating. we can wait. These wounds heal with time, just be patient.

Shitza

I liked Miroku's lil masturbating scene..you should do more of these scenes.
And I want to congradulate you on your English. For it not being your first language you're doing very well with it ^^

Interesting, I wish there were more Miroku/Sango fics (or at least more Sango fics), but could you please work on the formatting. Please update soon.

ja, Ich mag deutsch, aber Ich bin nicht so gut mit meine deutschkenntnisse und mein lehrerin ist sehr streng (sie ist einen grosse Weibsstuck ab und zu)!! Ich spreche irisch, englisch, deutsch und ein bisschen franzozisch. I mochte japanisch nachtes jahr im uni studieren, mit Englisch und Psychologie. Mochtst du mir uber deine geschicte untersuchen fur englisch Fehler (e-mail mich mit deine Kapital)? hoffentlich, du verstehst meine deutsch!! Ich kann kaum erwarten deine nachtste Kapital zu sehen!!

P.S. Was statt wohnst du?

just a quickie =P.... its french hby the way and are you crazy??? Spanish has 12 past tenses!!!!! do japanese!!! they only have two!!!

I'm too tired right now to think german. Your english is getting better, but you only use "an" before a vowel, the exception being "hour". I don't think the tickets are for sale yet, and i need a job first in order to buy them. Your solo was very good, I couldn't imagine doing a short story let alone a solo in german. go you!!

Looking forward to the next Kapital!!

yey!! i loved the solo! heh... oh! and love how inu was all... 'uhh.. where's kagome? i should find her!' and runs off... ;) funny... although, your grammar is getting worse... sorry.... but maybe you could find someone to help you out w/ that! anyhow, i loved the update! oh! and it would be great if sango had followed him!!! :D anyhow, i'm looking forward to the next chapter!

sure! masturbation's great. i dont know that sango would... but you know miroku has to, like, every day. ;) he's such a cute perv...