rate_review Reviews

Hey! This was a cute story and I pretty much loved it. I'm a bit surprised that you are doing a literature major (if I remember corectly) and have such spelling problems... I'm not judging you, so don't get me wrong. You have ideas and that's very good. I'm waiting for you to finish the sequel before reading it - it's an odd habit of mine. I can't stand people who don't finish what they started. Reading a story and having the writer suddently stop posting, that is very frustrating. The reason why I'm writing to you is that I'd like to help you. I'm offering you my services as beta. It's your call if you decide to accept or not. By the way, you said that you wanted Sesshomaru to be more submissive, right? It didn't seem to me that he was submissive, more like warmer and more loving. I think it's actually better this way. I like Inuyasha and the yaoi fanfiction so I'd read just about anything. :D I take it you're not squeamish when it comes to incest? It's all nice and dandy, but how do you feel about this type of relationship in real life? (and here I go... asking hard questions... ) Sorry, luv... you've made me interested and curious - a very dangerous combination. Think about my offer and maybe I'll hear from you soon.

How can your grammar be sooo off?? You're not alone when it comes to this, in this AFF world but still, since you mentioned that you were a 'Literature Major' and student, how can it be this awful???

Anyway, still reading and will give comment at the end..

It was ok...But this was one damn hard anime fic to read, due to the very bad grammar..It just makes no sense sometimes..I don't know how some readers can read through it and not get frustrated like i did..???

Part 2 was alright of a read also..

Overall, the only thing i have to say is, GRAMMAR, you need to REALLY work on it..It's just soooo ridiculously bad...

Emotions: 0.0 :) :D ^_^ d: *x* @.@ X.X -_- =( =o while reading this story. U EVIL SON OF A BITCH!!! Keep writing.d:

You know Ive read so many stories (I dont even know myself) But Why!? must there always be a continuation of the ones I love. Any ways i hope you start the next story.( If you havent already) You know I wish there was no such thing as continuation.

hurry up with the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved your story. The fake last chapter caught me off gaurd. I might do that myself in one of my stories *laughs evilly* I really did like it though! I usually don't stories where guys get pregnat in yaoi because then the character's personality becomes wacked but I like your story even though Inu-baka gets pregnat. ^.^

PS. I refer to InuYasha as Inu-baka only because I picked the habit up from my friend, and admit it, he can be a real idiot at times. I really love InuYasha so don't think I don't like him, I may not love him as much as Sesshy, but I love him. ^.~

YOU ARE ONE SICK WOMAN GETTING ME ALL EXCITED ABOUT CHAPTER 14 GOOD STORY THOUGH KEEP IT COMING.

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!IT IS GREAT!!!!!!!!!1

Thats not evil...thats just mean.I've decided not to say anything more about this......"but i am thinking it".("xxxx" is serious but also a joke reference to another AS show)