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for The New Girl At Shikon High

by beccapatty

person ME
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok this is really getting cool and interesting so PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON (like today) lol
person Reko-san
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, it seems to be going pretty. Good. How about trying afew things. Like, not using chat speak (( stuff like "lol" and "plz" )) and taking the time to write out the words and actions. Oh, and you could make the chapters abit longer.
person ME
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD U LEAVE IT there EEP!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE REALLY REALLY SOON!!!!!
person Rei
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooh cool story!!! ... KIKYO CAN GO TO HELL FOR ALL I CARE THAT WHORE THAT BITCH THAT SLUT THAT THAT THAT THINGY!!!! UM IS KIKYO REALLY GOIN TO WITH INU OR SHE'S JUST SAYING THAT CAUSE SHE WANTS HIM? WELL SEE YA IN THE NEXT CHAPTER! CAN YOU EMAIL ME WHEN YOU UPDATE?
person essie
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thsi is great please update
person Scar
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story keep on going
person jem
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
me likey... UPDATE SOON!
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked how you started this of, but now I want to know what happens next! Is this going to be a Kag/Inu fic... or somthing else?? I hope you update soon!