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for The New Girl At Shikon High

by beccapatty

person Fran
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I really like it. Update soon, can't wait to see what happens next.
person lisha
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi, becca!!! i just finished your story as it is now. it's great!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! so you do me a favor and I'll do you one: O.K> here it goes:

UPDATE VREAL SOON AND I'LL DO THE SAME. SO do we have a deal here? I can't wait to read the next ch.


PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!



bye!! ^_^
person Angel2005399
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss that was sooooo good you have to right another chapter but for a hint you should put some lemon in it about Kagome and Inuyasha.
person Anon
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Great story...
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Fran
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter. At least they will be getting to know each other soon. Keep writing. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Chicken Lady
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, THats so Kawii! I would have to pet his fluffy ears too! OMG! PLEASE Update A.S.A.P PLEASE! I wanna know what happens nexts!!!!
person ME
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Inuyasha was blushing *smiles wildly* lol this was a good chapter i like how you recapted who was in her class that was a good idea i cant waite to read the next chapter in this story UPDATE SOON!!
person Fran
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next.
person mel
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. I liked it a lot. Hope you keep updateing and not just leave it at that. Anyway, Good story & update soon.
person Rei
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow cool chaappy!!! i cant wait for the next one poor miroku well see ya in the next one tell me when you bring it up! tehehehe well see ya!!!