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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha would have smelled Kikyou and known that he was not with Kagome in the closet. He has no excuse for what he did and Kagome knows it.
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh shiiiiiiiiiit.
Keep writing, I must see how they're going to get out of this one!
Keep writing, I must see how they're going to get out of this one!
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey this was a great chapter getting really interesting please update soon!
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome lemon^^ and chapter. Hmm, whenever I have a party with my friends and we play truth or dare, we can never think of any good dares and you gave me ideas, thanks a bunch for unknowingly helping me^^ Um IDK where this story should go, I'm too tired to think, maybe another day.... Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a good chapter i cant waite to read the next one so UPDATE SOON!!
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
there was no protection so maybe you should get Sango pregnant. That ought to be great to read seeing them try to work things out for the babies sake.
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eh.. great chapter. It's really interesting although you do have some spelling and punctuation errors. But that's okay, I still love you anyways. Great beginning! -goes to read the next chapter-
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eh.. I don't want to sound mean or anything, but you really need a beta. Oh and um.. since Kagome's been so homeschooled, she shouldn't be saying the f-word because she wasn't taught bad words, now was she? -lifts brow- maybe you should make it that she hangs around Inuyasha so much that she starts swearing but till then she's still suppose to be innocent. So yeah.. keep that in mind.
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
greAT start
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude this fic kicks major ass! Although at times somethings seem random, I dont really mind because life is infact random. I like how you've portrayed the characters and hope to read a lime soon^^ Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!