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for The New Girl At Shikon High

by beccapatty

person chanda
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my poor Kagome, I cant believe you left that as a cliffy.. . .
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Anyway please update soon.

Chanda
person yay
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay u updated!!! cant wait for more
person kkkkk
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please review!!!
person TricksterGoddess
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well gee that sucks... in order to prove his love to her, he should slowly kill Kikyo in front of her... then they should make up... Kidding^__~ Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!
person lisha
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, becca... I really should BEAT THE LIFE OUT OF YOU!!!!

I CANT BELIVE IT!!!! I WORK SO HARD TO KEEP THE SYORY INTERESTING AND YOU -- YOU BLOW THE WHOLE THING UP?!?!?!?

MAN!!!! O.K. Deep breaths...... I'm fine now don't take it to hard but you'd better not tell my story before I update the next ch.

I'm not mad at you, at all. In fact I glad you figured that out, but don't tell anybody else. O.K.?

Oh, sorry but I really had to erese your last review. can't have the readers know the story line before you tell them which is, right?

And HAPPY BIRTDAY!!! ^_^

P.S. My bday is on Oct 28-- I'll be 18. Hehehe. update soon, and read the second chapter of my second story, tell me what you think?
DON'T FORGET!!!! UPDATE SOON, PLZ!!!!! ^_^
person Subaru
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh cruel! To put the story at such a cliffy how sad! Update soon!!!!
person mrsjenthornton
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. :)
person lisha
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, bacca.... it took you a while to update, but I'm not mad at you, I REALLY LIKED THE CH.

So PLZ KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK


P.S. Could you read the last ch. I posted and tell me how I'm doing? the other readers don't really seam to have an opinion about ch. anymore, only about the story.

I'm REALLY frustrated!!!!!! PLZ HELP!!!!! * puppy eyes *

Thanks,
lisha
person lisha
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi becca!!!

Me again!!! ^_^

Just wanted to let you know that your debt has been dubled!

you ow me two ch. Update soooon. please!!!!????!!!! T_T


lisha
person lisha
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi, beca!!!! Yeah, it's me alright. I just wanted you to know that:

You have no idea how much I loved reading the last chapters! THEY WERE SOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!

Can't wait until you update again!!!!

Hey! I just left you behind!!!! you ow me another chapter!!!!

because I just uodated!!!!! HE! HE! HE!

bye, bye!!!!!

lisha ^_^