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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eh... the chapter did seem a little rushed... it wasn't horrible, but i think you gave away the girl's background a little quick. i did like the little mocking poem that fortune wrote to sesshy though. that was very well done ^-^.
i am interested how you are going to set up interaction between the girl and fortune and sesshy.
I'll review again ^-^
i am interested how you are going to set up interaction between the girl and fortune and sesshy.
I'll review again ^-^
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol this was great! i love the sarcasm, and the wit in conversations between Sesshy and Fortune (i hope i spelled that right). fan girl is cool too... i cant wait for sesshy to visit her now...
please update soon
please update soon
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol yeah i am still following this fic. you cheered me up with Sesshy's bug problems thank you!!! the comparison with the elephant and the mouse was awsome. really it was!
happy writing!!!
happy writing!!!
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, Sesshomaru handled the cockroach better than I would have. I almost fell off my chair laughing at that. And then my feet came off the floor. I have to agree with Sesshomaru, cockroaches are creepy! I'm glad Alaska doesn't have a big roach problem. (at least where I live) *smiles* And I thought humans only had phobias. Fortune's never going to let that one down. I love the interaction between these two. This a wonderfull story in the making! I'm patiently wait for the next chapter!
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol, yea I guess you kinda should have just replaced it chapter by chapter but it's no biggie. I can't remember exactly what I said in my first review besides the fact that your story is awsome. Where did you find out that Rice doesn't want her charater's to be used in other writings? Huh, it's intresting I think this is the first time I've seen this situation. And I'm one of the people who asked to send me updates please. I would really appriciate it. Keep up the good work and I'll be waiting for the next chapter to come out!
TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!
TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello!I like your story!Do continue,I wanna know what happens to the girl!!!
Bye!
Bye!
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update. Now. T_T
Your story makes me happy, do update.
Your story makes me happy, do update.
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love this story. keep up the good work. can't wait till next chater
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You just gained a fan for life! I love this story. I have not read a story written in this way before. And an added plus, I love Sesshomaru and Vampire stories.