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Nice chapter. I almost missed it cause I was so busy but I'm glad I didnt! So is Fortune's house the trio's new hangout? it seems that way. I liked the conversation about what kind of a youkai Sessh is and how he knew. It was very funny ^-^. From the way you wrote Fortune's history it sounds like he takes a bystandard position a lot, even though we see him as directly... flamboyent... not sure if thats the best word to describe Fortune in behavior but I'm too tired to come up with anything else. I thoughts that the way you set up his history was very interesting, and a nice foil to our usual perception of him.
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Goodluck

oh whoops forgot this in the last review but... i think you forgot to close some tabs or something cause the italics kept going after a certain point in the chapter.

YAY!!!!! Finally I am back!!!! School is over and summer is here! Then I went on vacation and now I have returned to read fanfics all day!!!!!!!!!! I shall pull an all-nighter, I must get many in before I go insane with depression from being so far away from these babies for so long!! So first up on the list was this one!!!! And I read and read for about an hour, and BOY! Was it good!!!!!!!! ^__________^ And now I want to read more of it! I love the story still! I didn't stop liking it in the length of my absence, lol. So I shall wait for the next chapter!!!!!!

TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!

^-^ I'm happy to see you updated. I liked how you started to dive into Fortune's history, but you still managed to keep the focus on the three spot light characters. Also your humor is nice and dark/dry which is nice in this stroy. It goes with the set up well. And no problem with the mistake in the last chapter, anyone could have done that ^-^. I'm just glad I could help.

Changing the pace was the way to go. It really brings home how.... disfunctional? quirky? (guess that will have to do) this group is. Holes in torsos, blood sucking one second and off for drinks at home togeather the next. It works well. Your welcome, hope you find some reading you like.

I really liked this chapter. It wasn't confusing at all to read; actually, I think the story is getting better and better with the progressive chapters. The characters of Fortune and Erin are fleshing out and taking form, and Sesshoumaru is staying more in character. I like the mixture of jokes, silly banter, and the occassional more serious glimpses of what an immortal life is like.

I finally got a chance to read your story its great. I myself only live about an hour from New Orleans. Sorry about the reviews on mine for some reason I thought you were supposed to delete them. It's different on fanfiction.net you have to. HEHE.

This is a very interesting piece. I've made correlations between the vampires of Ann Rice and Sesshoumaru in my own fic. I've always thought immortality would be something harsh to deal with and Youkai, at least very old Youkai, would probably approach this the same way. Your storytelling is quite engaging and the interest is already there for me. Youkai and vampires are my fangirl fantasy, tee hee. Keep up the great work, this is very imaginative!

Hi ^-^ first thing first, check the times that you used in this chapter. At first you said that it was 9:56 or something like that and that sesshy would be coming at 10, but you quickly changed that to 10:5ish.
I loved this chapter! it made me laugh so much. Erin's plan was perfect in all of its faults, and the way sessh reacted to seeing forturne drinking erin's blood was perfectly suited for his character. the discription of the fight, and fortune's free lunch *lol* was great. i think it matched pretty well the style of writing you have been using for the action scenes.
Over all great chapter, just be sure to check details.

Found this last chapter strangely refreshing, and no I do not fine the switch between the characters speaking and thinking difficult t follow. As for the rest of your note I'll email a plethora of info to you>